Lunch Break: 1803

Sunday, November 29, 2015

1803

a flicker of hope
all we need to steer our course -
hatred a dark void

a dark void hatred
insatiable hunger feeds -
birds twitter again

twitter again birds -
the morning comes in measured
notes song unending
© gillena cox 2015

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33 comments:

Anonymous said...: True!; 9:48 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for dropping in Thotpurge

much love...; 9:51 AM
Mary said...: Yes, we must keep our eyes on that flicker of hope!; 9:58 AM
Sanaa Rizvi said...: No doubt a flicker of hope can help steer our path away from a dark & undesired void.
Have a lovely weekend Gillena :D

Lots of love,
Sanaa; 9:58 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped in Mary

much love...; 10:04 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for linking up Sanaa

much love...; 10:04 AM
Jae Rose said...: Very effective word play and a song that really lingers :); 10:31 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped in Jae

much love...; 11:27 AM
Sumana Roy said...: Hatred is indeed the dark void....; 12:02 PM
Mascha said...: True soulful poem!
Have a blessed new week; 12:18 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks Mascha

much love...; 12:50 PM
brudberg said...: Oh please give me shelter from that dark wind.; 2:16 PM
Sherry Blue Sky said...: Hatred is a dark ditch that thankfully most of us do not want to fall in....well said, Gillena.; 2:17 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Surely Bjorn a worthy plea
thanks for dropping by

much love...; 2:22 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped in Sherry

much love...; 2:22 PM
Donna@LivingFromHappiness said...: Beautiful...and it is that hope I cling to!; 2:59 PM
tonispencer said...: I do like how this wraps around itself. And hatred is indeed a dark void, a ditch. Happy Advent to you. A good reminder of Light and Love.; 3:10 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped in Donna

much love...; 4:55 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks Toni

much love...; 4:56 PM
Blogoratti said...: Hope is all we need in this present day and time. A great piece indeed!; 6:33 PM
Truedessa said...: A candle or flicker of hope is needed in the world; 7:24 PM
Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger said...: Hope and stillness--beautiful--this just shines; 10:24 PM
Old Egg said...: Looking forward to this season of promise has lasted over two thousand years, what a blessed consistency.; 10:42 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for dropping in Blogoratti

much love...; 1:24 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Indeed Trudessa indeed

much love...; 1:25 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you for your appreciation Audrey

much love...; 1:25 PM
Gillena Cox said...: "a blessed consistency."
i like that phrase

Thanks for dropping in Robin

much love...; 1:26 PM
Anonymous said...: I think I like the last verse the best. Nice to meet your work.; 2:37 PM
humbird said...: hatred...unwillingness to look at world through someone else's eyes....hope we are able to stretch and reach the hand of our closest neighbor....; 4:22 PM
Rajesh said...: Beautiful.; 9:46 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you pviljoen

Much love...; 2:03 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for your appreciation humbird

Much love...; 2:03 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped on Rajesh

Much love...; 2:04 AM