[a 3 by 4 inch sketch, ink and brush, done on a white drawing pad page]
kiskadee
on my neighbour's rooftop -
beak slicing the air
© gillena cox 2019
Here in T&T it's Carnival Time, Season of Bacchanal.
A happy Season of Carnival to T&T.
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Weekend Meditation #112 Transformation ... sketching from life (Shiki's Shasei technique)
Shiki hated associations, contrasts, comparisons, wordplays, puns, and riddles - all the things we are cherishing here! He favored the quiet simplicity of just stating what he saw without anything else happening in the haiku. He found the greatest beauty in the common sight, simply reported exactly as it was seen, and ninety-nine percent of his haiku written in his style.
PROMPT:This weekend I love to challenge you to re-create a haiku (in Shasei style) by Shiki into a Tanka. Here is the haiku to work with:
kaboocha yori nasu muzukashiki shasei kana
Sketching from life —
eggplants are harder to do
than pumpkins
© Masaoka Shiki (Tr. Burton Watson)
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pumpkins and baigan
so colourful the market stalls
my one basket serves
to take all my purchases
carefully back to my house
© gillena cox 2020
In Trinidad and Tobago we do say eggplant, but we also call them BAIGAN
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CARNIVAL PAST photos © gillena cox
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[this Pink Periwinkle from my garden]
Sharp beak... and eye, too, in the case of the speaker.
ReplyDeleteHappy Sunday, Gillena.
Happy you dropped by R
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Happy you dropped by Magaly
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Lovely!!π
ReplyDeleteHappy Sunday, Gillena!
Thanks for dropping by Sanaa
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Hoping that slicing beak is filled with song!
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped by Maggie
ReplyDeleteAh he/she didnt sing just move head around and flew off
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Kiskadee and beak wielding immense power. Love to you and this little feathery stroke of colour on a Sunday morning.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation H
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Oh ~ love your brush painting and haiku ~ very creative ~ ^_^
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A ShutterBug Explores,
aka (A Creative Harbor)
Thanks for your appreciation Carol
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The kiskadee is a sharp little bird – loud too!
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped by Kim
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The imagery of your words were so vivid Gillena! Thank you! Happy Carnival to you, I love seeing the photos!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Lea
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Beautiful as usual :)
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped by ZQ
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Liking it, Gillena. We have the mockingbirds on our rooftops, singing to each other from house to house.
ReplyDeleteListen to the birds
Singing housetop to housetop
Mockingbirds we love
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Thanks for dropping by and sharing a verse Jim
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The wonders of simplicity! Love the sketch and haiku.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Bev
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I always love your beautiful Haigas.
ReplyDeleteThere are some birds that flap around outside the kitchen window. The cat will park his butt on the stove so he can watch them. Not while I'm cooking, of course!
~cie~
Thanks for dropping by Cie
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Lovely sharp image! (As well as beak.) In both words and picture. And now I have learned about a new bird – always fascinated by the ones we don't have here.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Rosemary
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A few words for a beautiful little bird. May it return to you again very soon.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Joel
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Oh, the fun of fresh produce markets. You certainly captured the feeling. namaste
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Janice
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A chirpy day with the birds!
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by Vandana
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You always show the delightful a part of your world Gillena...thankyou for that.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by Robin
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eggplant and pumpkin
ReplyDeletepleasing in taste
vibrant in color
in my grocery cart
satisfying both
Adelaide
adore the sketch and words
ReplyDeleteLove the imagine of 'beak slicing the air'. It is so nuanced … especially placing it on a neighbour's rooftop ~ smiles ~
ReplyDeleteSo delicate and pretty
ReplyDeleteVery yummy tankaπAdelaide
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Thank you for your appreciation Wendy
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Happy you dropped by Jae
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Thanks for your appreciation Margaret
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I adore the sketch and the haiku that it paired with it. Perfect!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Susie
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oh thank you! more bird song-more jublient reassurance!
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by Rebecca
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