tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21158266.post6681647796886123537..comments2024-03-28T12:18:04.252-04:00Comments on Lunch Break: 1048Gillena Coxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21158266.post-27207661052852296282012-11-08T14:21:26.932-04:002012-11-08T14:21:26.932-04:00thank you for sharing Chelle, posting your haiku u...thank you for sharing Chelle, posting your haiku upfront<br /><br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21158266.post-23396461015791194592012-11-07T18:42:41.120-04:002012-11-07T18:42:41.120-04:00Not sure if this is right, but Sasha dislikes the ...Not sure if this is right, but Sasha dislikes the sound of the garbage trucks. She usually runs to hide underneath the bed until they pass.<br /><br /><br />big metal monsters--<br />cat gets scared and runs under bed<br />sound of food it is safe<br /><br />Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09633257060118839361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21158266.post-71641014056253390332012-11-07T07:15:06.240-04:002012-11-07T07:15:06.240-04:00Lorraine humble bow; thank you for your appreciati...Lorraine humble bow; thank you for your appreciation<br /><br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21158266.post-4366315219803157442012-11-07T07:14:13.467-04:002012-11-07T07:14:13.467-04:00Bill thank you for your interpretation of my haiku...Bill thank you for your interpretation of my haiku; surely appreciated<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21158266.post-61414911473232387882012-11-07T07:12:55.315-04:002012-11-07T07:12:55.315-04:00Vivian thank you for stopping by; hoping things ge...Vivian thank you for stopping by; hoping things get back to a state of normalcy soon; thank you also for your sharing<br /><br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21158266.post-92121327697795641902012-11-07T06:38:42.465-04:002012-11-07T06:38:42.465-04:00it's so interpretive I would have seen a sweet...it's so interpretive I would have seen a sweet song among irritatingn things without a single word, you're an excellent artist dear GillenaOut of Sight Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14153612060228196177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21158266.post-60976903050587709772012-11-06T19:20:28.469-04:002012-11-06T19:20:28.469-04:00between the songs
of morning birds
the trash colle...between the songs<br />of morning birds<br />the trash collection<br /><br />Using materials drawn from yours, Gillena. This gives a 2:1 format, a common variation on the 1:2 format you've employed. It also illustrates the effect of doing without punctuation entirely. I think the break remains clear. What do you think? Billhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21158266.post-59923726989851765902012-11-06T16:22:28.999-04:002012-11-06T16:22:28.999-04:00Here's my contribution:
after the typhoon--
t...Here's my contribution:<br /><br />after the typhoon--<br />the ocean's shimmering smile<br />feigning innocence<br /><br />We are still picking up after Hurricane Sandy, which swept away some of our waterfront here in New York City--but a lot less than the worst predictions! Trying to get back to normal with gasoline shortages, and still lots of people with no power (in the freezing cold!)<br /><br />Thanks for the education on haiku and haiga--and I love your poems and illustrations--<br /><br />I still use the traditional haiku form, just because I like the challenge, I guess...<br />Yeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08924005848870170400noreply@blogger.com