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blended easily
two hearts speaking nuances -
a tasty smoothie





sweet blessed mercies -
prescription in words holy
for promised futures



Miranda (The Tempest), John William Waterhouse


there are instances
when a boat veers in tempest -
jagged rocks appear


all haiku © gillena cox 2016; images from google dot com


Written for Susan's mid week prompt ~ Marriage

28 comments:

  1. Gorgeous Haiku sets Gillena :D
    Happy Midweek to you :D


    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  2. Thanks Sanaa

    much love...

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  3. Anonymous9:04 AM

    i think the last image of the boat in a tempest represents well the ups and downs of a relationship!

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  4. wonderful set Gillena...only if all journeys were smooth sailing...sigh...

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Sumana

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  5. Taken together or separately, these three reveal such truth. If the middle one is true, the last can be survived. I love the image of the smoothie! Mine was less blended--more like an ice cream soda. No wonder it didn't last.

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  6. I especially like the tempest haiku. Well done!

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  7. Marriage takes many courses doesn't it? Hopefully the rocks aren't too jagged.
    The haiku a great choice to emphasize the different qualities.

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  8. Anonymous12:51 PM

    I love the way you approached this. How fantastic to use a fruit smoothie as a metaphor for marriage. And if they're the right flavors, they're so much tastier together. :)

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Em

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  9. It's not all sweet but maybe the best relationships can weather a few storms

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  10. Gillena,

    The rough and the smooth of marriage, just as reality sometimes delivers!
    Eileen

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  11. The whole idea of marriage is to make the couple one being, not just two people in love; so hopefully they think the same, appreciate the same things and want the same things too.

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  12. Thanks for your appreciation Robin

    much love...

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  13. Just wonderful! My favorite is the last one.

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    1. Thanks for dropping in Sara

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  14. Sweet thought and sweet words.

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  15. Thanks for dropping in Rudra

    much love...

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  16. Succinct comments on aspects and kinds of marriage' well done.

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  17. Thanks Rosemary

    much love...

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