[flower in this haiga from google dot com]
REVISED HAIKU © gillena cox
morning breeze -
dew from a flower
moistens the earth
...
murky pond -
the dew drops on the lotus
different shapes
FUSION HAIKU © gillena cox
all the dewdrops
will eventually roll off
into the pond
TROIKU: DEWDROPS © gillena cox
all the dewdrops -
sparkling diamonds on
flower and leaf
eventually rolled -
into the potted earth
dewdrops nourish
into the pond
waters merge -
no more dewdrops
Carpe Diiem #1551
Dew Of The World (Revise That Haiku ... Hineri)
HAIKU PROMPT
koborete wa tada no mizunari beni no tsuyu
the dew of the rouge flower,
when it is spilled
is simply water
© Chiyo-Ni
hasu no ha ni kono yo no tsuyu wa magarikeri
on the lotus leaf,
the dew of this world
is distorted
© Issa
CHALLENGE
1. Revise the both haiku;
2. Create a "fusion"-haiku with the revised versions;
3. Compose a Troiku with your "fusion"-haiku.
