Whoops, just commented from a different computer, and David was the wrong name! Excellent poem, I can smell the promise, and I love the sound and feel of your words, "tease" and "drizzle"
Today was our first 70degree day in this part of California, and I could smell the soil...."what's that smell?" I could smell the sun!
I think this is quite spectacular, Gillena! I really enjoy your new style of haiga...they leave some work for the reader to do, and you connect the haiku very well. :) Lary
__In 3 days... N.E. coast has seen nearly 2 inches of rain each day!
ReplyDelete__These, just lovely Gillena!
And thank you... March 10th has come and gone, but I will pay more attention to CKK! _m.
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ReplyDeleteWhoops, just commented from a different computer, and David was the wrong name!
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem, I can smell the promise, and I love the sound and feel of your words, "tease" and "drizzle"
Today was our first 70degree day in this part of California, and I could smell the soil...."what's that smell?" I could smell the sun!
Well done, Gillena
Dianne
I think this is quite spectacular, Gillena! I really enjoy your new style of haiga...they leave some work for the reader to do, and you connect the haiku very well.
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Lary
evocative Gillena
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Thanks all for stopping by thans for the appreciation
ReplyDeletemuch love
gillena
I don't care if it's a haiku, or tanga or what have you, it's absolutely stunning
ReplyDeleteshimmering beauty
ReplyDeletei like how anticipation is building on every word, well done Gillena
ReplyDeleteBJ, comrade and Lorraine; thanks for stopping by
ReplyDeleteLorraine its haiku + image = haiga
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much love
gillena