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Monday, March 15, 2010

Smell Of

10 comments:

  1. __In 3 days... N.E. coast has seen nearly 2 inches of rain each day!
    __These, just lovely Gillena!

    And thank you... March 10th has come and gone, but I will pay more attention to CKK! _m.

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  3. Whoops, just commented from a different computer, and David was the wrong name!
    Excellent poem, I can smell the promise, and I love the sound and feel of your words, "tease" and "drizzle"

    Today was our first 70degree day in this part of California, and I could smell the soil...."what's that smell?" I could smell the sun!

    Well done, Gillena
    Dianne

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  4. I think this is quite spectacular, Gillena! I really enjoy your new style of haiga...they leave some work for the reader to do, and you connect the haiku very well.
    :)
    Lary

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  5. evocative Gillena
    john

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  6. Thanks all for stopping by thans for the appreciation

    much love
    gillena

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  7. I don't care if it's a haiku, or tanga or what have you, it's absolutely stunning

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  8. i like how anticipation is building on every word, well done Gillena

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  9. BJ, comrade and Lorraine; thanks for stopping by

    Lorraine its haiku + image = haiga

    :)

    much love
    gillena

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