Early dawn's curtain,
Drawn to reveal rain showers,
And a pertinent absence of birdsong;
The hum of a motor engine;
The coolness of this morning,
Is quickly snatched away,
As the rain subsides;
Bird songs;
Kiskadee,kiskadee,kiskadee,
And sunlight floods the morning
Curtain call
opening windows-
a reservoir of raindrops
on leaves
--gillena cox
lovely !
ReplyDeleteGabi
yes lovely
ReplyDeletejohn
Grand!
ReplyDelete_m
I breathe easier when I visit you, thanks so much ;)
ReplyDelete"reservoir of raindrops" is a wonderful phrase.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteFrieda
Thanks to all of you for your appreciation
ReplyDeletemuch love
gillena
Picture so well created here! beautiful.
ReplyDeleteI like your second curtain call here, Gillena. The rainy season first curtain call set the scene very nicely though.
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rain subsides, open all windows
ReplyDeletea beautiful and vivid write!
Beautiful and serene.
ReplyDeleteYes, this is a lovely poem with the feeling of spring in words and imagery!
ReplyDeleteYou awaken all the senses with this poem. Stunning!
ReplyDeleteso fresh. that morning scent. can feel it.
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