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Thursday, August 12, 2010

Cinderella Syndrome 12


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alley cat
his bold stare as he slips through
the wrought iron gate
--gillena cox

"Miaow", which really meant, "Cheer up! You have something neither of your stepsisters have and that is beauty." It was quite true. Cinderella, even dressed in rags with a dusty gray face from the cinders, was a lovely girl. While her stepsisters, no matter how splendid and elegant their clothes, were still clumsy, lumpy and ugly and always would be. [Ivy Joy's Fables and Fairy Tales]


continuing the Cinderella Syndrome or What every girl should have; well!!! at least once in her lifetime, anyways...in haiku/haibun style throughout the month of August; e-mail me or add your contributions at comments; to included in the day's post

5 comments:

  1. I am liking everything about this tale, bravo Gillena :)

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  2. what a beautiful haiku!

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  3. I like your haiku. I can totally see this alley cat. Probably because they--and their hard stares--exist the world over.

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  4. Okay, I'll take a stab at this Cinderella thing. Every girl should have, at least once in her life, a night of pure romance.

    summer stars so bright
    I'm your destiny, he said
    and she believed him

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  5. Thanks for stopping by Lorraine, Frieda and Kelly

    Kelly thanks for the haiku, it will be used later as the story unfurls


    much love
    gillena

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