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Wednesday, November 24, 2010

Morning Impressions



per syllable count the verse in the image is not a haiku as its exceeds seventeen beats

here's another presentation which can be accepted as a tanka



this early morning
rain
it laves even
the silent intervals
of a bird's song
--gilena cox

11 comments:

  1. This laves, Gillena -- beautiful :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. This is beautiful Gillena I love both sketch and words equally...wow
    (but I have to admit, I hate the word 'lave' I just hate it in English, it's a French word...

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  3. Beautiful!
    Hugs:)

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  4. This is very calming.
    I like the drawing and the words, too...
    and I just learned that "lave" is an english word (fascinating!)

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  5. Frieda calming is a correct
    connotation and precisely why i chose to use 'lave'
    Devika, Lorraine, Joo glad you stopped by

    Lorraine there are words i too do not like but lave is not one of them; HUGS

    much love
    gillena

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  6. I'm catching up on neglected sites.
    Beautiful poem/tanka and image.

    Adelaide

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  7. Juliet, Adelaide thanks for stopping by

    much love
    gillena

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  8. I often play with the line breaks and word placements in my haiku before I finally decide which one to publish, but sometimes those alternatives that I never used still stick in my mind. Nice to know I'm not the only one.

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