Morning Impressions
per syllable count the verse in the image is not a haiku as its exceeds seventeen beats
here's another presentation which can be accepted as a tankathis early morning
rain
it laves even
the silent intervals
of a bird's song
--gilena cox
This laves, Gillena -- beautiful :)
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devika
This is beautiful Gillena I love both sketch and words equally...wow
ReplyDelete(but I have to admit, I hate the word 'lave' I just hate it in English, it's a French word...
Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteHugs:)
This is very calming.
ReplyDeleteI like the drawing and the words, too...
and I just learned that "lave" is an english word (fascinating!)
Frieda calming is a correct
ReplyDeleteconnotation and precisely why i chose to use 'lave'
Devika, Lorraine, Joo glad you stopped by
Lorraine there are words i too do not like but lave is not one of them; HUGS
much love
gillena
lovely!
ReplyDeleteI'm catching up on neglected sites.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem/tanka and image.
Adelaide
Juliet, Adelaide thanks for stopping by
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gillena
I often play with the line breaks and word placements in my haiku before I finally decide which one to publish, but sometimes those alternatives that I never used still stick in my mind. Nice to know I'm not the only one.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations for your beautiful site! Congratulations and good luck!
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