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Saturday, January 21, 2012

Renku Saturday 14


image from google


does my star too
sleep alone?
Milky Way
--Issa, 1822


one black bird singing
to the light of morning -
i too am alone-
--gillena cox 2012


revisit Renku Saturday 13
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4 comments:

  1. Crafty Green Poet4:38 PM

    I like the side by side comparison of the two haiku here

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  2. Gillena Cox8:58 PM

    Thank you Juilet; glad you stopped by


    much love...

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  3. Bill3:13 PM

    Yes, a very nice pairing, and the jux in yours is most effective.

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  4. Gillena Cox5:20 PM

    Thank you Bill

    much love...

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