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Defining Haiku here at Lunch Break that's 30 days, November 1st - 30th of haiku features

The haiku in today's haiga(illustrated haiku)

Divali eve -
bent bamboo patterns
bare
--gillena cox

Today's note - clutter


a haiku very often is morphed out a series of jottings, scribbles and write overs. In this process one of the uppermost issues for the writer is abstracting,
cutting out the unnecessary to get to the bare one breath reading experience

for example.....

eve of Divali -
only the bent bamboo shapes
no lights

eve of Divali -
only the bent bamboo
no deyas

eve of Divali -
the bent bamboo structues
as yet bare

eve of Divali -
the bent bamboo structues
yet bare

eve of Divali -
the bent bamboo structues
still bare

eve of Divali -
the bent bamboo structues
as yet bare

eve of Divali -
the bent bamboo sculptures
yet bare

and finally.......

Divali eve -
bent bamboo patterns
bare


I invite you to share some of your expertise on clutter with me


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