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Saturday, March 02, 2013

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Its Renku Saturday #31
revisit Renku Saturday #30

To tangle
or untangle the willow
it’s up to the wind
-- Chiyo-Ni (1703-1775)
(trans. Donegan & Isibashi)


language of the breeze
wind chimes this morning
--gillena cox


breeze whispers
a long ago Love
Love that never hurt me
--Lorraine Renaud, CA

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10 comments:

  1. Bill1:38 PM

    That's a beautiful little ku, Gillena. "this morning" gives it an in-the-moment feeling.

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  2. Anonymous6:39 PM

    very beautiful...I can hear the chimes, feel the breeze.

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  3. Magyar9:40 PM

    __Such nice language, that of the "breeze," and yours that paints the scene. _m

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  4. Adelaide11:31 PM

    I've been catching up on your posts for the past week. Love them all.

    Adelaide

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  5. Out of Sight L8:14 AM

    breeze whispers
    a long ago Love
    Love that never hurt me

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  6. Gillena Cox6:50 PM

    Bill, i always appreciate your critiques, thank you

    much love...

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  7. Gillena Cox6:51 PM

    Geraldine, thank you for dropping in

    much love...

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  8. Gillena Cox6:51 PM

    Adelaide, glad you dropped by


    much love...

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  9. Gillena Cox6:52 PM

    Lorraine thank you, i'll edit and add your verse to the renku


    much love...

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  10. Gillena Cox6:56 PM

    Doug, thank you for your appreciation

    much love...

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