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Linking to Sunday Whirl Wordle #102

Early Retrospect

peak of dawn
twitterings
the staff of morning
heralds

early whistlers...
ixora berry
locks in a beak

the silence
of interludes...
a song grounded

awakening pit...
cloud puffs powders the face
of new day

a large moon...
the Easter vigil ended
petals in bouquets

exalt in alleluias...
for again the stone
is rolled away

as it is written...
love redeemmed a world
that was lost

and so
this calls
for celebration
lenten fast
past


--gillena cox

12 comments:

  1. A beautiful sequence, Gillena.

    Would you explain the Wordles? What are the general guidelines and anything else a reader should look for? I see that the words come from the sequence.

    Adelaide

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  2. Thank God for the ending of the Lenten fast! I appreciate your retelling of the old, old story.

    Awhirl with Richard Wright

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  3. Adelaide
    if you click the hyperlink, it will take you to the 'Sunday Whirl' where these word scramble images called wordles are posted, the idea is to write a poem using the words given as a prompt; then you can use the linky tab at 'Sunday Whirl' to enter your poem post there, as well as red other rsponses to the prompt; its quite interesting

    much love...

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  4. MMT

    thank you for dropping in; i enjoyed reading your response to #102

    much love...

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  5. well done, Gillena, this has a lovely feel...

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  6. How lovely the words spill in your work...

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  7. Lovely. It all works very well. I think my favourite is

    exalt in alleluias...
    for again the stone
    is rolled away

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  8. lenten fast
    the days pass
    slowly

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  9. Polona thank you for dropping in

    much love...

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  10. Tumblewords thank you; welcome to Lunch Break

    much love...

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  11. Dave, thank you; welcome to Lunch Brea

    much love...

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  12. Bill; glad you stopped by


    much love...

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