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Thursday, August 22, 2013

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Back linking today to Sunday Whirl Wordle #122


she dreamed of years nestled
in the space between degrees

paying tribute
a period if the heart may
and vision stay

persuaded to skip lightly
along her diamond rimmed floor
--gillena cox
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6 comments:

  1. Bill9:59 AM

    dreamed space . . .
    the heart pays tribute
    to the years

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  2. Gillena Cox2:55 PM

    nice one Bill, might turn into a wordler; smiles


    much love...

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  3. Magyar4:25 PM

    __One could value each day__ as a degree.

    Thus, this day's (degree's?) Cinquain:

    each day
    degrees nestled
    within the passing time
    a circle closed with every year
    new start

    __You cause imaginations to explore, Gillena, thanks!
    __I'm sure you are aware that a
    'circle' has a mere 5 degrees... less than... a 'year' has days.
    Best wishes! _m

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  4. Gillena Cox4:59 PM

    Magyar, this is nice you also, are becoming a wordler

    much love...

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  5. Out of Sight L6:40 AM

    Wow can you ever put it all together and so beautifully, ah dear Gillena, you always amaze me!

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  6. Gillena Cox7:03 AM

    Happy you dropped in Lorraine

    much love...

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