Linked today to Sunday Whirl Wordle #124; read the other Wordles
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An inky sky, to sway webs, light as feathers whirling close to stars, where sparks, splintered from oiled wheels of day and night, no doubt somersaults; a scarlet arrow shoots a hole through the abyss where wet surfaces of ocean murmurings dared to ripple; like moonlight over lost intergalactic asteriods
staccato treetops...
the spiral sounds of
helicopter flights
--gillena cox
Interesting read and love the well oiled wheels of day and night, so apt, ...... and somersaulting sparks give great imagery!!
ReplyDeleteyou always come through, quite a talent you have Gillena :)
ReplyDeleteYour piece makes me want to see the sky from your piece of the world. I love the phrasing of "the spiral sounds of helicopter flights." Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteNanka, thank you for your appreciation
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Thank you Lorraine; happy you dropped in
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Brenda, thanks for the appreciation; and thanks for keeping us wordling
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There are some lovely words associations here allowing the reader in imagine what you can see.
ReplyDeleteYour word pictures allow a reader to enter your dream! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteoldegg, thank you for you appreciation
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Thank you for you appreciation WabiSabi
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Great imagery! And I too loved "the spiral sounds of helicopter flights." Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Daphne
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