(image from google.com)
night rolled away...
the street-sweeper's broom
deepening dawn sounds
--gillena cox
Linking today to Recuerda Mi Corazon 'A Virgin A Day' (till Dec 12 in honour of Our Lady Of Guadalupe)
ADVENT CALENDAR 2013
21 DAYS TO CHRISTMAS
A clever sweeper this, to be able to brush away sounds!
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MMT
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oh ....gosh I feel transported to the time Love came to earth..wow
ReplyDeleteLove your imagery and creativity.
ReplyDeleteHappy you stopped by Lorraine
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Thanks Maggie, glad you dropped in
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Love this Gillena. Enjoyed first read - second made me sigh with pleasure at the beautiful simplicity of your words - words that conveyed so much.
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Thank you for your appreciation Anna
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Another take on the journey of Advent beautifully depicted in your art and your words. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteYou take me to a magical place.....
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Ruby
love the simplicity of your verse! so fitting for the common-looking man and his wife needing a place to stay.
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ReplyDeleteyou are a weaver of gorgeous word tapestries!
Once again so evocative and the black and white image intensifies the impact of your words visually! Beautiful
ReplyDeleteFran, image for this one from google, haiku mine
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thanks for stopping by
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thanks for your appreciation Ruby
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thanks Rebecca, humble bow
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Thank you for your appreciation Hettienne
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thanks for your appreciation Nonnie
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Nice response on Hando's haiku Gillena
ReplyDeleteKristjaan, glad you stopped by
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