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Wednesday, January 22, 2014

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AT BEYOND

Conjuring raindrops
she hides amongst the clouds
cap of golden curls

twine around
cumulus puffs like trinkets
a jeweler crafts

Sigh!
carry back the sunshine
to the upper room

Dont neglect
the eagles nest at beyond
you truant spirits

Bend the bow of colours and place it
-- gillena cox




Back Linking Today to Wordle # 144 at Sunday Whirl



AND Linking To
Poetry Jam 'Look To The Clouds'

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41 comments:

  1. Brian Miller9:02 AM

    ha. took me a second...but this is cool...like a maestro of the storm....conducting the rain and even bending the rainbow to put in place for the finale...smiles.

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  2. Mary9:05 AM

    I really like the 'cap of golden curls.' Enjoyed this!

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  3. Out of Sight L9:33 AM

    you're so inspiring when you do that, one day when my laptop starts making any sense to me again, I may just try lol

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  4. Vandana Sharma9:48 AM

    a cloudy day.......

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  5. Gillena Cox9:53 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Brian (◕‿◕｡)

    much love...

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  6. Gillena Cox9:53 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Mary

    much love...

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  7. Gillena Cox9:54 AM

    Happy you stopped by Lorraine (◕‿◕｡)

    much love...

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  8. Gillena Cox9:55 AM

    Thanks for dropping in Vandana

    much love

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  9. Sumana Roy10:20 AM

    Fabulous description all through..
    so love the closing line...

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  10. Unknown10:24 AM

    I clicked on the picture to enlarge it and found the rainbow hiding among the clouds!

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  11. aspiritofsimplicity10:45 AM

    a very clever write and a nice read

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  12. Laurie Kolp10:46 AM

    Enjoyed this... especially the golden curls and 2nd stanza.

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  13. Gattina1:06 PM

    Very nicely written !

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  14. Gabriella1:23 PM

    Very sweet poem! The opening line is very engaging.

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  15. Mascha2:06 PM

    I like the picture and the poem

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  16. alan17042:50 PM

    cap of golden curls - this is lovely and makes me feel of warmth and beauty. Nicely captured.

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  17. Magyar3:00 PM

    So inventive Gillena; grand!
    _m

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  18. Gillena Cox3:28 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Sumana

    much love...

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  19. Gillena Cox3:29 PM

    Glad you stopped by Robyn (◕‿◕｡)

    much love...

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  20. Gillena Cox3:33 PM

    Simplicity
    Thank you for your appreciation (◕‿◕｡)

    much love...

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  21. Gillena Cox3:34 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Gabriella

    much love...

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  22. Gillena Cox3:35 PM

    happy you stopped by Mascha

    much love...

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  23. Gillena Cox3:35 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Alan

    much love...

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  24. Gillena Cox3:36 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Magyar

    much love...

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  25. Sherry Blue Sky12:15 AM

    I like the cap of golden curls, too!

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  26. Gillena Cox1:54 AM

    Happy you dropped in Sherry

    Much love ...

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  27. The Unknowngnome2:17 AM

    There's something about this piece that just grabs me. I've read it four times already and each time I drift further beyond. Well done Gillena.

    I really like: "carry back the sunshine to the upper room". :)

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  28. Gillena Cox8:29 AM

    Gnome, Thank you for your appreciation (◕‿◕｡)


    Much love ...

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  29. Leovi10:46 AM

    Yes, I really like this beautiful poem!

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  30. Peggy4:30 PM

    I enjoyed this! Lovely cloud descriptions.

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  31. Gillena Cox4:57 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Leovi

    much love...

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  32. Gillena Cox4:58 PM

    Thanks Peggy, happy you stopped by


    much love...

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  33. Carraol1:35 AM

    Love the sound of these words!

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  34. Gillena Cox5:12 AM

    happy you stopped by Carraol


    much love...

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  35. Susan Lindquist10:22 AM

    I like the imagery here ... it's nice to think of a grand master of light that works magic with the clouds ...

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  36. Gillena Cox11:15 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Susan

    much love...

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  37. Gillena Cox12:06 PM

    Happy you dropped in Brenda

    Much love ...

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  38. Intelliblog7:34 PM

    Lovely words woven into a beautiful, colourful tapestry.

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  39. Gillena Cox11:01 AM

    Thank you Nicholas

    much love...

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  40. Peggy12:59 PM

    Sorry to be so late in commenting. This is really a wonderful poem. Thank you for posting this lovely description of clouds!

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  41. Gillena Cox7:49 AM

    happy you dropped in Peggy, appreciate the late visit

    much love...

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