little hummingbird
feeding from my ixoras...
do you see me
-- gillena cox
Poetry Jam 'Where You Live'
Carpe Diem #387-pilgrim
on a pilgrimage
a quest to the truth of life -
skylarks sing their song
skylarks sing their song
giving the O-Henro new energy
on their pilgrimage
(c) Chèvrefeuille
PPFWeek 47 year 3
The last line is a real shift which surprises the reader. Nice!
ReplyDeleteSuch an abstract image of the hummer!
ReplyDeleteThis delighted me! The hummingbird is indeed an intrepid pilgrim!
ReplyDeleteI really like this composition, abstract fine, beautiful colors!
ReplyDeleteRita, thank you for your appreciation
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happy you dropped by Kim
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Thank you for your appreciation, WabiSabi
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happy you stopped by Leovi
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very sweet and I learned the name of the flower, ixoras!
ReplyDeleteA bird and flowers, a very sweet looking place!
ReplyDeletesweet post today, Gillena
ReplyDeleteYou have created a delightful word picture!
ReplyDeleteused to have a kid i worked with...his porch was full of hummingbirds...they are such amazing birds....we get a few in the summers....
ReplyDeleteglad you stopped by Robyn
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Thanks Gabriella
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Thanks AD
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they are like flying jewels arn't they Brians; thanks for stopping by
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I googled the flower and now can perfectly see the hummer feeding! Thank you for this lovely image.
ReplyDeleteI used to have a hummingbird feeder, but all I attracted were ants, no hummingbirds.
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Thank you for your appreciation Peggy
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Happy you stopped by Adelaide, maybe some ixora plants would help
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I always, always see you, your art shines
ReplyDelete(◕‿◕。) thank you Lorraine
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Beautiful lines as always. Happy PPF to you.
ReplyDeleteNice movement and color!!
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Hugs Giggles
smashing digital work. Happy PPF, Annette x
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Only a few hummingbirds in summer in Maine. They are such a treat to watch. I wonder what they think when they see us?
ReplyDeleteLovely colors in your hummingbird painting, Gillena. The hummingbirds shunned us this year for some reason.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful haiku Gillena.
ReplyDeleteLovely art in visual and written. I too, like very much how the ending line surprised me.
ReplyDeleteNice work.
Annabelle
Thanks Soulbrush
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Thank you for your appreciation Giggles
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Happy you dropped in Annette
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happy you stopped by Donna
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thanks Faye, happy you stopped by
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thanks Kristjaan
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Thank you for your appreciation Annabelle
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Thank you for your your appreciation Mary
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A hummingbird is the perfect description. Excellent
ReplyDeleteDelightful! Hummingbirds are a blur, aren't they?
ReplyDeletehappy you stopped by Alan
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Thank you for your appreciation Laura
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Good moment, Gillena, highly relatable. Remember this one?
ReplyDeletebutterfly
how long will you
remember me
nice one Bill; thanks thanks for sharing
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Wonderful abstract piece. You make it look so effortless.
ReplyDeleteNicole/Beadwright
GLad you liked it Nicole
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Lovely images and the idea of a pilgrimage is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Nicholas
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