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if the rain comes
soaking dry bones and boughs
window splatter

drawn curtains
the first drizzle
smell of parched
dry earth

this teasing teasing few drops
a child can count the raindrops

will the coming June
open generous bounty
to quench crawling ants

earthworms unseen they must be deeply asleep

still slumbering .. earthly sweet
........Caladiums .. know the answer

--gillena cox


I am blog hopping today at

Poetry Jam prompt - 'Rain'

33 comments:

  1. i know the feel of waiting for that rain...when the bones are dry...
    and once it is there...what a relief.....smiles.

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  2. Thank you for your appreciation Brian

    much love...

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  3. Who doesn't know this feeling? :)
    Something all of us can relate to. Beautiful.

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  4. Oh this is so beautifully sad, so I'll do a rain dance for you beautiful Gillena x

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  5. Ants, earthworms .... surely the rain will draw them out! Happy blog hopping!

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  6. "smell of parched
    dry earth"..oh i've almost forgotten that aroma...beautifully written

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  7. Love this, Ants, eathworms, excellent picture of the hope and freedom of refeshment.

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  8. happy you stopped by Ayushee

    much love...

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  9. sounds great Lorraine

    much love...

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  10. Thanks Helen

    much love...

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  11. I do hope you soon get the rain you are longing for. I am sure that the earthworms will like it.

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  12. I could smell the rain. You made it come alive.

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  13. You have eloquently sketched a scene of nature – parched – and then a hopeful note: the, still slumbering, Caladiums. Lovely!

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  14. Happy you stopped by Gabriella

    Much love

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  15. Thank you for your appreciation Gail

    Much love...

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  16. thank you for your appreciation Wendy

    Much love...

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  17. I know about waiting for the rain--not much chance now here until fall. I like the photo too.

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  18. Anonymous11:48 PM

    rain would be lovely here. well penned, Gillena ~

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  19. Thanks for stopping by Peggy

    Much love

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  20. Thanks grapeling

    Much love ...

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  21. You have captured so well the feeling of waiting for rain... I am sure the earthworms will be pleased as well.

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  22. Oh, the waiting ... we wait with such impatience, but the earthworms and flowers wait in a quiet suspension ... and then burst forth. You've created good tension in this piece ...

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  23. Thanks for stopping over Mary

    Much love...

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  24. Thanks for your appreciation Susan

    Much love...

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  25. I specially love the ending ~ Though I must tell you its been raining & pouring here lately ~

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  26. Though we have had more rain than necessary lately, I can still feel the drought in your words.

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  27. Happy you stopped by Grace

    Much love...

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  28. Thanks for your appreciation Donna

    Much love...

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  29. Love the idea of a child counting the raindrops.

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  30. Lovely, Gillena! The longing for rain is so well expressed and there are some lovely images in your poem!

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  31. Thank you for your appreciation Laurie

    Much love...

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  32. Thanks Nicholas

    Much love...

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  33. Such an illustrative and pretty poem. Been bloghopping all evening and came back here to comment again. Loved it.

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