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Wednesday, June 11, 2014

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lost in its magic
the sunset wrapped in thoughts
securely golden

gold gilts the sky
the kisadees find shelter
for the span of night

silhouettes weave
the night for dream seekers
loss of bird songs

solace found
fullness of cooling breezes
twinkling stars

to share a wish
one such falling star plunges
lost to fantasy

moon rays
fill spaces lost to mind sight
dreams filter in
--gillena cox


i am blog hopping today at Poetry Jam the prompt is "lost and found"

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26 comments:

  1. Brian Miller9:50 AM

    oo i like falling stars...and both day and night have their magic...some are lost for a few hours so we can enjoy the magic of the other...cool take...

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  2. Swathi Shenoy12:07 PM

    Good one :) I always wanted to wish on a falling star but never have seen one. Send one my way next time you see it ;)

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  3. Gabriella12:30 PM

    I enjoyed the peaceful and serene tone of your poem, Gillena. It feels dreams can indeed 'filter in'.

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  4. Sherry Blue Sky12:31 PM

    Very beautiful imagery, Gillena. I especially love "silhouettes weave the night for dream seekers", being a dream seeker myself!

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  5. Gillena Cox1:01 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Brian

    Much love...

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  6. Gillena Cox1:02 PM

    Will do Swathi , for sure, happy you dropped in

    Much love...

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  7. Gillena Cox1:03 PM

    Thanks Gabrielle, happy you dropped in

    Much love...

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  8. Gillena Cox1:04 PM

    Happy you dropped in Sherry

    Much love...

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  9. Mary1:49 PM

    You have created a lovely scene here and used such beautiful language. I love 'the sunset wrapped in thoughts.'

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  10. alan17041:49 PM

    Beautiful images and pictures, falling stars that capture our hearts,

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  11. Gillena Cox2:46 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Mary

    Much love...

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  12. Gillena Cox2:47 PM

    Happy you stopped by Alan

    Much love...

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  13. Madwoman11:28 PM

    Wonderful--I love the falling stars too!

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  14. Gillena Cox3:28 AM

    Madwoman , thanks for stopping by

    Much love...

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  15. Donna Smith9:42 AM

    "one such falling star plunges
    lost to fantasy"
    Never thought of it as lost to fantasy...but it is.
    Lovely poem!

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  16. rallentanda11:08 AM

    Spirtual and beautiful.

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  17. Sumana Roy12:31 PM

    "to share a wish
    one such falling star plunges
    lost to fantasy"...my favorite portion Gillena..i love how beautiful images come in one by one and take their place truly like dreams...a
    beautiful write..

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  18. Gillena Cox12:58 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Sumana

    Much love...

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  19. Mary4:59 PM

    The last stanza is breath-taking. I love the idea of moon rays filling spaces lost to mind sight! But I really DID enjoy all the language in this poem.

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  20. Gillena Cox7:45 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Mary

    Much love...

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  21. Adelaide8:59 PM

    Each individual haiku is breathtaking.

    Adelaide

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  22. Out of Sight L9:15 AM

    This is amazing oh Gillena you are sprouting magic, wow

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  23. Gillena Cox10:35 AM

    Thanks Adelaide

    much love...

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  24. Gillena Cox10:36 AM

    Thanks Lorraine

    much love...

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  25. Bill12:17 PM

    after the birds
    have grown silent
    the evening breeze

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  26. Gillena Cox12:44 PM

    Thanks for stopping by and sharing your lovely haiku Bill

    Much love...

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