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Thursday, March 12, 2015

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image courtesy Carpe Diem

on first reading -
the yellow of narcissus
stored in a poem
© gillena cox

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I wandered lonely
as a cloud That floats on high
o'er vales and hills,
# William Wordsworth #found haiku

[this is the first 2 lines rearranged, of the poem by # William Wordsworth 'Daffodils also known as 'I wandered lonely
as a cloud'] you can read the entire poem here
also posting this to the Facebook Group - Found Haiku





blog hopping today at
Carpe Diem #685,first flowers of Spring
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22 comments:

  1. Pat R6:32 PM

    The yellow of narcissus....what a thought. It all comes from somewhere doesn't it. Nice one.

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  2. Gillena Cox8:23 PM

    happy you dropped in jazzy

    much love...

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  3. Blog It Or Lose It9:58 PM

    Special memories in the Wordsworth poem -- i like how you've added it as a "found haiku". :)

    Perhaps that would be a fun exercise -- haiku all around us -- if we have the heart to look. And your narcissus haiku has heart ---

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  4. Unknown11:03 PM

    What a lovely haiku!! and I like how you "found" WW haiku...I've always been fond of his poetry and loved visiting his place on Lake District. Brilliant!!

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  5. Unknown4:12 AM

    Beauty again on this page.. bit of a long process making a commen though

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  6. Adas Alcove4:14 AM

    Nicely done!

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  7. Reading Pleasure6:23 AM

    Ah, Wordsworth. Incidentally, Daffodils is being studied as one of Romantic poetry by my son in school.

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  8. Out of Sight L8:47 AM

    You are so magnificent using words that are dreamy with photos that leave me breathless Oh Gillena, you give so much x

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  9. Gillena Cox10:48 AM

    thank you for your appreciation Jen

    much love...

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  10. Gillena Cox10:48 AM

    thanks Cheryl

    much love...

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  11. Gillena Cox10:49 AM

    happy you dropped in Hamish

    much love...

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  12. Gillena Cox10:49 AM

    thanks Dolores

    much love...

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  13. Gillena Cox10:50 AM

    very nice Celestine

    thanks for dropping in

    much love...

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  14. Gillena Cox10:51 AM

    thanks for your appreciation Lorraine

    much love...

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  15. Lolly11:19 AM

    Love this one, Gillena

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  16. Gillena Cox2:33 PM

    thanks Lolly

    much love...

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  17. joanna uk4:30 PM

    I love the idea of found haiku.
    Makes you feel you established contact with a wellknown poet.

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  18. Gillena Cox5:10 PM

    happy you dropped in girl Friday

    much love...

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  19. kaykuala8:23 PM

    You made it a gem teaming up with Wordsworth, Gillena! Like your style as always. Simplicity works!

    Hank

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  20. Anonymous9:14 PM

    I love that last line!

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  21. Gillena Cox11:24 AM

    happy you dropped in Hank

    much love...

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  22. Gillena Cox11:25 AM

    thanks Janice

    much love...

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