image from public domain, text and frame added to make this haiga
no match for a snail
the bonsai tree
aged and twisted
© gillena cox
Carpe Diem #692, mud snail
en hana ya jyôzu ni magaru katatsumuri
verandah flower--
making a skillful turn
a snail
© Kobayashi Issa
hiroinokosu tanishi ni tsuki no yûbe kana
mud-snails:
a few remain uncaught
under the evening moon
© Yosa Buson
sode yogosuran tanishi no ama no hima o nami
with dirty sleeves
farmers-turned-fishermen pick up mud snails
ever so busy
© Matsuo Basho (at the age of 39)
slowly, but slowly
the mud-snail finds its way
after the heavy rains
© Chèvrefeuille
ah, nice one!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful, Gillena -- !!!
ReplyDeletethanks Hamish
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Thanks Jen
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Very nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Dolores
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no match indeed but oh my how very lovely, I feel the warmth, thank you Gillena x
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping in Lorraine
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Super haiku, Gillena!
ReplyDeleteTenacity of bonsai certainly no match
ReplyDeleteHank
I think a snail would feel a bit like a giant under a bonsai tree! Cool poem ... I really enjoyed it. Bastet
ReplyDeletethanks Maggie
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thanks for your appreciation Hank
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happy you dropped in Georgia
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too fun!! The snail has a big tear
ReplyDeleteLove it
and thanks again for the treat of your poetry for the orphan project
many hugs
Happy i contributed Leslie, thanks for dropping in
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