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Wednesday, April 15, 2015

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the rumbling earth -
thoughts of angry gods seep through
the control of breath

© gillena cox






Carpe Diem #707, Breath Control

16 comments:

  1. Great haiku - I almost feel a nordic ancient touch :)
    (thinking about thunder and Thor)

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  2. Thanks for your appreciation Birgitta

    Much love...

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  3. very nice, your haiku proves how powerful a "controlled breath" can be...warding off thunder and angst within. Blessings x

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  4. Thanks Dolores

    much love...

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  5. Thanks for your appreciation Cheryl Lynn

    much love...

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  6. .....WOW Gillena I felt the power of the earth, and the coming of Spring, i love this

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  7. Thanks for your appreciation Lorraine

    Much love...

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  8. Thanks for dropping in Magyar

    Much love...

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  9. lovely nature haiku for breath!

    Happy Weekend to you,
    artmusedog and carol

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  10. they do, don't they.

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  11. If the gods were angry, I'd be breathless too!

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  12. (◕‿◕。) thanks for dropping in girl friday

    much love...

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  13. happy you dropped in Maggie

    much love...

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  14. thanks Janice

    much love...

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