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this weird woman counts
syllables on her fingers-
freezing dawn's bird songs
© gillena cox 2016


Written for Sumana's prompt
Mid week motif ~ weird
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21 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue Sky12:59 PM

    I love the closing line especially.

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    1. Gillena Cox1:29 PM

      Thanks for dropping by to read mine Sherry

      Much love...

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  2. Sanaa Rizvi1:10 PM

    This is pure perfection :D

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    1. Gillena Cox1:29 PM

      Thanks for your appreciation Sanaa

      Much love...

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  3. Blogoratti1:58 PM

    Really subtle and divine.

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  4. Gillena Cox3:36 PM

    Thanks for dropping in blogoratti

    much love...

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  5. Rosemary Nissen-Wade5:03 PM

    Ha ha ha – a bit of fun which suddenly, in that last line, becomes much more.

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    1. Gillena Cox8:58 AM

      Happy you dropped in Rosemary

      Much love...

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  6. Hannah5:54 PM

    Yes, I count like that, too! This resonates...guess I'm weird as well!! :) Great poem and presentation, Gillena.

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    1. Gillena Cox8:58 AM

      LOL happy you dropped by Hannah

      Much love...

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  7. Susan8:37 AM

    Haha! I wonder if you do this or if it's something you saw? I like the image very much.

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    1. Gillena Cox9:00 AM

      Yes Susan I count on fingers when writing haiku

      LOL
      thanks for dropping in Susan

      Much love...

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  8. Diane Mayr8:45 AM

    So many of us are weirdos, it's too bad we're not closer together!

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  9. Gillena Cox8:59 AM

    Thanks for dropping in to read mine Vanderloost

    Much love...

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  10. Gillena Cox9:35 AM

    (✿◠‿◠) Happy you dropped in Diane

    much love...

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  11. Magaly Guerrero10:48 AM

    Love the movement. And yes, the shivering last line! ♥

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    1. Gillena Cox10:43 AM

      Happy you dropped in Magaly

      Much love...

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  12. Magyar5:17 PM

    __Nice Gillena_!
    Sounds form, the links of this tempo; hawks soar.
    _m

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    1. Gillena Cox10:43 AM

      Thanks for your sharing Magyar

      Much love...

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  13. Adelaide9:31 PM

    Sunday or Monday
    the same table
    at the cafe

    Adelaide

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  14. Gillena Cox7:38 PM

    Happy you dropped in Adelaide, thanks for leaving a share of your haiku

    much love...

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