Ishizuchi mo nankin no hana mo ooi nari
The flower of a pumpkin
as well as Mt. Ishizuchi
is great in scale
the reach for a pencil
to note a TV recipe
[photo of my grand daughter December 2016]
two sets of footprints
in freshly fallen snow
one pair from Kyoto
her first winter vacation
and snow ready for her throw
Carpe Diem
Tan Renga Challenge Month 2017 #8 The flower of a pumpkin (Tomiyashu Fusei)
Carpe Diem
Tan Renga Challenge Month 2017 #7 two sets of footprints (Hamish Managua Gunn)
Ishizuchi mo nankin no hana mo ooi nari
The flower of a pumpkin
as well as Mt. Ishizuchi
is great in scale
© Tomiyasu Fusei (1885 - 1979)
the reach for a pencil
to note a TV recipe
© gillena cox
two sets of footprints
in freshly fallen snow
one pair from Kyoto
© Hamish Managua Gunn
her first winter vacation
the snow ready for her throw
© gillena cox
Don't Leave Before You See Again
11 May 2011
11 May 2014
I like these very much – in both the everyday details, and the way you have taken the original hokku in new directions.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation Rosemary
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__ Just my imaginative glance at your granddaughter... as she returned home. Nifty. _m
ReplyDeletefirst snowball
back to the oil-drum music
a warm smile
Thank you for dropping in and sharing a haiku, Magyar (✿◠‿◠)
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Oh Gillena, I love how you complete both with life as it is around you...beautifully done!!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Cheryl Lyn
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Chapeau!
ReplyDeleteHumble bow Kristjaan,
ReplyDeletethanks for dropping in to read mine
much love...
ReplyDeletePhoto of grandchild and two liner '...snow ready for her throw' [haiga] Accepted for publication in Failed Haiku September 2018 issue - Family.