a wandering crow
its old nest has become
a plum tree
lingering twilight adds
a coat of gold to evening
washed in silhouettes
her cabin dons a creepy mien -
bedtime stories
a cricket withholds its chirp
green leaves wet with dew
coffee aromas
in hushed tones of morning's breath -
earnest prayers
feet slipping into sandals
to continue trek of scenes
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[image courtesy Carpe Diem]
wind in the pines
swirls upward to heaven
whispered prayers
her steady trust of needle
beauty embroiders itself
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Carpe Diem
Tan Renga Challenge Month 2017 #18 a wandering crow (Matsuo Basho)
This pre-script was not by Basho himself, it was added by Doho in his book Sho O Zen-den. In this poem Basho compares himself to the crow painted on the screen. Instead of lodging in the simplicity of a crow's nest, he sleeps among plum blossoms because he is staying with an elegant friend. Crows are not usually considered a migrating bird, but the idea of a wandering crow means a bird of passage or a priest on a journey. (Source: "Basho's Complete Haiku" by Jane Reichhold)
a wandering crow
its old nest has become
a plum tree
-hokku © Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
lingering twilight adds
a coat of gold to evening
washed in silhouettes
her cabin dons a creepy mien -
bedtime stories
a cricket withholds its chirp
green leaves wet with dew
coffee aromas
in hushed tones of morning's breath -
earnest prayers
feet slipping into sandals
to continue trek of scenes
- verses 2-6 © gillena cox
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Carpe Diem
Tan Renga Challenge Month 2017 #17 wind in the pines (Candy)
wind in the pines
swirls upward to heaven
whispered prayers
© Candy
her steady trust of needle
beauty embroiders itself
© gillena cox
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A beautiful Soliloquy no Renga Gillena. Thank you for sharing.
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Beautiful and evocative, thanks Gillena :D)
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped in Sue
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delightful, vivid images. "gold coat" "creepy mien" Wonderful! Well done.
ReplyDeleteI also love the movement or flow of time in the solo renga. twilight, bedtime (night), then dew (morning), then coffee and morning, and then off into the day's activities.
I see what you did there. Nice!
Thank you for your appreciation Lolly
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You are one talented haijin as well as a prolific writer.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on getting two haiku in Heron's Nest.
Adelaide
Thank you Adelaide
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