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Wednesday, July 19, 2017

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[image from google dot com used in this haiga]


stealing sand
a little at a time -
outgoing waves



opened oven -
wafts of raspberry
slowly escapes
© gillena cox 2017

Blog hopping today with


Carpe Diem
#1222 Beach

Carpe Diem
#1223 Raspberry

17 comments:

  1. And now my mind can almost smell the cobbler! Well done, Gillena.

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  2. Happy you dropped in Dove

    Much love...

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  3. I enjoyed those waves stealing sand, Gillena, but the raspberry wafts made my mouth water!

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  4. You're making me hungry with this aromatic haiku!

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  5. (✿◠‿◠)

    happy you dropped in Kim

    much love...

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    Happy you dropped by Lynn

    much love...

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  7. __ Always, Gillena, grand; and time moves on! Thanks G, and from your sands came this Cinquain thought. _m


    The seas
    ground stone to sand
    with years of hammer tides,
    and moved its toil from here to there,
    to here.

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  8. Thanks for dropping by and sharing Doug

    Much love...

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  9. Beautiful with vivid imagery !

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  10. Thanks for dropping in Milan

    much love...

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  11. Thanks for dropping by Kristjaan

    much love...

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  12. I like "stealing sand." About time someone blew the whistle on the ocean.

    In the other one, you want "escape" to agree with the plural "wafts."

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  13. Thanks Bill, much appreciated

    much love...

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  14. I found your site very beautiful and distinguished too. Thank you for your good work and continue.

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  15. Awesome blog, i always enjoy & read the post you are sharing!
    Thank for your very good article...!

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