new moon -
a truck roars sensing shape
into dawn quietness
© gillena cox 2018
The Chinese speak of “writing a painting” and “painting a poem.”
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Wonderful haiku
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Nicely conjured.
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There is always the sound of an engine when we least expect it.
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Dawn quietness disturbed.......sigh.
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You have "painted" this haiku oh so well Gillena! Thank you!
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Happy Sunday Gillena
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"2620" - interesting - I wonder what would be around in the year 2620? Nature disturbed by the roar of an engine somewhere in the distance. There's a lot here in so few words.
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You have certainly painted a poem here!!
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Beautiful!!❤️
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Reading this feels like waking up or starting a novel you know you're going to enjoy. :)
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Oh, this is wonderful ... the way have created a rather abstract line between the dark quiet - pierced - by the blast of dawn into a new day. Love it, Gillena.
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I like how the sound of the engine pierces the silence of the dawn.
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I can imagine trying to distinguish betweeen reality and a dream as I awake in the morning with sounds of the day and my dreams all mingled. Great haiku Gillena.
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I love the contrast of the silent new moon and the truck breaking the quietness, Gillena. Have a great week!
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You've captured it!
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