AWAITING
building a bridge
between snow-covered mountains
white egrets/ mb
piercing dawn before the sun
song birds and their choruses/gc
don't be like me
even though we're like the melon
split in two/ mb
yearning for a sail to set
us years apart no longer/ gc
wait awhile
cut the soy beans to the sound
of monks beating bowls/ mb
rosary beads the colour of
morning light as she rolls them/ gc
path of the sun
the hollyhock leans into
early summer rain/ mb
two shadows frame the path
as midday cast her divide/ gc
plovers fly away
the evening grows later with
cold mountain winds/ mb
seashells no longer carry
fairy tales with glass slippers/ gc
summer rain
where the poem card peeled off
a mark on the wall/ mb
our initials enclosed
a heart carved in a tree trunk/ gc
3liners © Matsuo Basho
2 liners © gillena cox
Carpe Diem
Renga With Basho #9 A Mark On The Wall
PROMPTED by Kristjaan, to create a renga with 6 given haiku, fromMatsuo Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold, taken from: Basho, the complete haiku)
REVISIT
25 September 2016
25 September 2015
25 September 2011
Gillena, this is wonderful. Your capping lines are perfect. I love this.
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their shadows
become one
Adelaide
Thank you for your appreciation Adelaide
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Awesome renga Gillena.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by to read min Kristjaan
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