closing the gate -
a whispered goodnight
to a sliver of moon
© gillena cox 2019
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[As I haiku my heart today 'sliver']
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Weekend Meditation #96 Little Ones ... Sedoka
Challenge: to create another kind of Japanese poetry ... Sedoka
Sedoka: 'Good Night Moon'
closing the front gate
a sliver of moon to tell
whispers from the heart goodnight
silhouettes remain
still without the night wind
sound of the lock snapping closed
© gillena cox 2019
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4 August 2015
oh wow Gillena - these are .... superb!
ReplyDeletethe very first haiku had me stopped to rights - breathless!
and your sedōka is just sublimely rapturous ... a most vivid image silver dripped into my mind's eye ... just divine .... how exceptional!
thanks for visiting and commenting (on mine) - Happy Sunday and a most generously wonderful week ahead :)
Wildchild, thank you for your appreciation
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Very nice!
ReplyDeleteKen, thank you for your appreciation
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Cie, thanks for dropping by
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Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by Rall
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I love both haiku and sedoka, Gillena! Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped by Kim
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Delightful haiku and love your brush painting ~ ^_^
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A ShutterBug Explores,
aka (A Creative Harbor)
Thanks for dropping by Carol
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Blessings, Gillena
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to saygoodnight to
a whispered prayer
Thanks for sharing Bill
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the same sliver of moon called to me last night and set my heart free.
ReplyDeleteAh the moon, happy you dropped by Rebecca
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Thank you for the beautiful music and haiku Gillena, they both fit together so perfectly, like the moon in the night sky...
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Lea
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Short and very sweet. The sliver gets it's day.
ReplyDeleteThaks for your appreciation Sharon
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