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Sunday, August 04, 2019

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closing the gate -
a whispered goodnight
to a sliver of moon

© gillena cox 2019


Wishing all my friends and visitors a Happy Sunday

Sunday Smiles



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BLOG HOPPING
[As I haiku my heart today 'sliver']

a weekly unfurling of tiny jubilant love


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Carpe Diem
Weekend Meditation #96 Little Ones ... Sedoka
Challenge: to create another kind of Japanese poetry ... Sedoka

Sedoka: 'Good Night Moon'
closing the front gate
a sliver of moon to tell
whispers from the heart goodnight

silhouettes remain
still without the night wind
sound of the lock snapping closed
© gillena cox 2019

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Sunday Lime 47
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19 comments:

  1. oh wow Gillena - these are .... superb!

    the very first haiku had me stopped to rights - breathless!

    and your sedōka is just sublimely rapturous ... a most vivid image silver dripped into my mind's eye ... just divine .... how exceptional!

    thanks for visiting and commenting (on mine) - Happy Sunday and a most generously wonderful week ahead :)

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    1. Wildchild, thank you for your appreciation

      Much❤🕊❤love

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  2. Ken, thank you for your appreciation

    Much❤🕊❤love

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  3. Cie, thanks for dropping by

    Much❤🕊❤love

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    1. Thanks for dropping by Rall

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  5. I love both haiku and sedoka, Gillena! Beautiful!

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    1. Happy you dropped by Kim

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  6. Delightful haiku and love your brush painting ~ ^_^

    Happy Day to You,
    A ShutterBug Explores,
    aka (A Creative Harbor)

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  7. Thanks for dropping by Carol

    Much❤🕊❤love

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  8. Blessings, Gillena

    no onde
    to saygoodnight to
    a whispered prayer

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    1. Thanks for sharing Bill

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  9. the same sliver of moon called to me last night and set my heart free.

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    1. Ah the moon, happy you dropped by Rebecca

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  10. Thank you for the beautiful music and haiku Gillena, they both fit together so perfectly, like the moon in the night sky...

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Lea

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  11. Short and very sweet. The sliver gets it's day.

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  12. Thaks for your appreciation Sharon

    Much❤🕊❤love

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