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Blog Hopping today with

FRUIT OR VEG

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Poets and Storytellers United
Weekly Scribblings #30: Writing as a Metaphor for Living
prompted by Magaly


DAY TO DAY
Each stanza of a poem applauds allusion,
For what is poetry, if not to be slowly savored
Like cherries plucked from an aged prickly tree
Long after the curtain comes down heavy, soft,
Silent, in velvet folds of meticulous grammar;
Call it fiction, for it becomes the stuff of dreamers,
No one wants the responsibility of reality;
The conflict is too great, the mood not right
For dying stars in dawn's pace of morning's rhythm
Edit the plot from dirge to sonnet where conflict
Of lovers and passion refuse the prose of politics
Word by word, step by step, day to day it's punctuation
© gillena cox 2020



34 comments:

  1. Wonderfully done. Looks good enough to eat.

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    1. Thank you for dropping by Mary

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  2. Bravo, this is lovely, completely transcending the prompt – so it was a little later I realised you got in every word.

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Rosemary

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  3. The many joys of poetry portrayed so perfectly!!

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  4. Thank you for your appreciation Vandana

    Much💙love

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  5. Cherries are my favorite and these are lovely, great poem too.

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  6. Thanks for dropping by Deann

    Much💖love

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  7. Perfect for both the Three Muses challenge and for Weekly Scribblings. Well done, Gillena!

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    1. Happy you dropped by Bev

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  8. I certainly savoured each word from this brilliant piece, Gillena!

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Vivian

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  9. From "dirge to sonnet" seems like the best plan to me!

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  10. Thank you for your appreciation Magaly

    Much💖love

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  11. I love the way lips are coloured by black cherries!
    I adore black cherries!
    Well done Gillena.
    Stay safe too!

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Sim

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  12. WOW!!💝 This is beyond beautiful, Gillena!! I especially love; "For dying stars in dawn's pace of morning's rhythm/Edit the plot from dirge to sonnet where conflict/Of lovers and passion refuse the prose of politics."💝

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  13. Thank you for your appreciation Sanaa

    Much💖love

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  14. Though sonnets are tricky, they're worth the effort.

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  15. Happy you dropped by Rommy

    Much💖love

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  16. What a cheerful cherry piece this is Gillena.

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    1. Thank you for dropping by Robin

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  17. I really do like "No one wants the responsibility of reality..."
    ..

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    1. Thanks for your appreciation Jim

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  18. this may be one of my favorites from you! this is a yummy and delightful piece of art! xo

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    1. Thank you for your appreciation Michele

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  19. "For dying stars in dawn's pace of morning's rhythm" - I can see the fading of stars of morning light. I will be reminded of these words each morning.

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  20. Glad you dropped by Joel

    Much💖love

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  21. I've found (and I'm sure you have too) that the best way to savor poetry is to read it aloud, lingering over especially delectable words and phrases.

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  22. Thank you for your appreciation Maggie

    Much💖love

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  23. Yes, ‘what is poetry, if not to be slowly savored’ - and the simile is delicious, Gillena! I love ‘…dying stars in dawn's pace of morning's rhythm / Edit the plot from dirge to sonnet’.

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  24. Thanks for your appreciation Kim

    Much💖love

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  25. "For what is poetry, if not to be slowly savored
    Like cherries plucked from an aged prickly tree"

    Gorgeous!

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  26. Thanks for your appreciation Margaret

    Much💖love

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