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Thursday, November 08, 2012

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Defining Haiku here at Lunch Break that's 30 days, November 1st - 30th of haiku features

The haiku in today's haiga(illustrated haiku)

a gentle rain -
deepening green of broccoli
in boiling water

--gillena cox

Today's note - juxtaposition

teaming of two images in such a way as to present a poetic aesthetic

a gentle rain = image 1; this can call to mind all sorts of emotive experiences in the reader
deepening green of broccoli in boiling water = image 2; a bit of surprise to the reader, deepening the poetic essence of the instant shared

I invite you to share some of your juxtaposition expertise with me


Today's tag

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6 comments:

  1. thank you Geraldine, glad you stopped by


    much love...

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  2. oh indeed I might just start to like broccoli

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  3. A very nicely designed haiga, Gillena...

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  4. Lorraine good and healthy too : )


    much love...

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  5. Frank; thank you, glad you stopped by



    much love...

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