Defining Haiku here at Lunch Break that's 30 days, November 1st - 30th of haiku features
The haiku in today's haiga(illustrated haiku)
a gentle rain -
deepening green of broccoli
in boiling water
--gillena cox
Today's note - juxtaposition
teaming of two images in such a way as to present a poetic aesthetic
a gentle rain = image 1; this can call to mind all sorts of emotive experiences in the reader
deepening green of broccoli in boiling water = image 2; a bit of surprise to the reader, deepening the poetic essence of the instant shared
I invite you to share some of your juxtaposition expertise with me
Today's tag
Oh, I like it!
ReplyDeletethank you Geraldine, glad you stopped by
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oh indeed I might just start to like broccoli
ReplyDeleteA very nicely designed haiga, Gillena...
ReplyDeleteLorraine good and healthy too : )
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Frank; thank you, glad you stopped by
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