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by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells
--JRB

sounds across many oceans
listen! through flipped pages
--gillena cox


47 DAYS TO CHRISTMAS



by the shore
discarded lovers
broken shells
sounds across many oceans
listen! through flipped pages


Linking today to Carpe Diem Tan Renga: “#319 - Shell” AND Haiku My Heart
AND Orange You Glad It’s Friday #63
Orange You Glad It's Friday
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45 comments:

  1. Reading Pleasure12:11 PM

    wonderful completion, Gillena. I can hear the sounds!

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  2. Gillena Cox12:34 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Celestine


    much love...

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  3. Lmkazmierczak2:41 PM

    Enjoyed your prose♪ Have recently attempted my own Haiku and am always engaged when I see other's♥
    visiting from OYGIF but here's my Haiku link: http://lauriekazmierczak.com/xoxo/

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  4. Gillena Cox3:14 PM

    happy you stopped by Laurie; thanks for leaving a link; i'll visit


    much love...

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  5. Spadoman4:11 PM

    Now I feel guilty. I know I should read more. I have a problem with concentration, but that is an excuse. I like the mixture of words and the theme running, (flowing), through. Very nice.

    Peace

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  6. Gillena Cox4:29 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Spadoman

    much love...

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  7. WabiSabi6:38 PM

    I love how you shifted and made the poem your own!! Nice to see you at Carpe Diem!

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  8. Gillena Cox6:57 PM

    Wabisabi thank you for your appreciation


    much love...

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  9. A Bit of the Blarney8:44 PM

    Now I want to walk on the beach...searching for the lovers! Wonderful haiku! Cathy

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  10. rebecca9:30 PM

    i am love struck for your haiku magic.

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  11. Lea10:33 PM

    I love the thought of pages, love letters, and the sound of listening to shells...

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  12. Anonymous5:22 AM

    Oh! Wonderful. :-)
    -HA

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  13. Out of Sight L6:02 AM

    Ocean and Christmas my two favourite things, I love this, 'o Holy Night

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  14. Gillena Cox6:16 AM

    happy you stopped by Cathy

    much love...

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  15. Gillena Cox6:18 AM

    Welcome back Rebecca, hope you had a nice trip

    much love...

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  16. aspiritofsimplicity6:19 AM

    very nice. I like that sound.

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  17. Gillena Cox6:20 AM

    happy you stopped by Anmol

    much love...

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  18. Gillena Cox6:22 AM

    Thanks for stopping by Lorraine

    much love...

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  19. Gillena Cox6:25 AM

    'aspiritofsimplicity'
    Thank you for your appreciation


    much love...

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  20. Anonymous6:28 AM

    This is a wonderful conclusion to my haiku. I love where you have taken it!

    by the shore

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  21. Gillena Cox7:38 AM

    Thanks JRB; glad you dropped in


    much love...

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  22. J C10:04 AM

    Wow, chills. My next walk on the beach will be for lovers, and lost loves

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  23. Hazel11:20 AM

    So I listen... They're marching. In my mind.

    Hazel

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  24. gma11:52 AM

    VERY COOL HOW YOU SWITCHED THIS AROUND. <3

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  25. Gillena Cox11:59 AM

    Judie SMILES, glad you dropped in

    much love...

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  26. Gillena Cox12:00 PM

    thank you for your appreciation Hazel

    much love...

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  27. Gillena Cox12:00 PM

    Gemma, thank you for your appreciation

    much love...

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  28. Laura12:37 PM

    Beautiful series Gillena! I do hope you'll participate in the Gratitude Quilt this year… information about what it is and how to participate can be found @ this link http://www.shinethedivinecreativityisaspiritualpractice.com/p/gratitude-quilt.html

    If I already asked you and you sent me something, please forgive me for asking again. I'm trying to reach as many people as possible.

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  29. 21 Wits2:08 PM

    Lovely Haiku magical to read!

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  30. Gillena Cox3:27 PM

    Thanks Laura, i'll visit


    much love...

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  31. Gillena Cox3:28 PM

    happy you stopped y Karen


    much love...

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  32. brudberg5:31 PM

    Wonderful completion... really

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  33. Anonymous12:44 AM

    Very intriguing, separately and as stanzas, or whatever they are called in haiku. Thanks for sharing.

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  34. Annie Jeffries4:05 AM

    Anything by the sea makes me happy and this does it very well.

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  35. Gillena Cox10:35 AM

    Thanks Bjorn

    much love...

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  36. Gillena Cox10:36 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Redondowriter


    much love...

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  37. Gillena Cox10:37 AM

    happy you dropped in Annie


    much love...

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  38. Sun7:54 PM

    wonderful way to complete this one. thank you. ♥

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  39. peggy gatto1:35 AM

    Love this, so thoughtful!!!

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  40. Gillena Cox3:50 AM

    happy you stopped by SUN

    Much love ...

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  41. Gillena Cox3:52 AM

    Thanks Peggy

    Much love...

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  42. Maria @ LSS10:45 AM

    The perfect words for a beautiful photo. Glad you decided to share your photo on Orange you glad it's Friday. Thanks for joining and I hope to see you again next Friday. Have a great weekend.

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  43. Gillena Cox5:25 PM

    thanks for hosting us at your Friday meme, Maria and happy you dropped in here


    much love...

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  44. Chèvrefeuille3:29 AM

    An extraordinary, so different and strong, completion of the Tan Renga ... well done Gillena. Thank you for sharing.

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  45. Gillena Cox7:07 AM

    Thanks Kristjaan

    much love...

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