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Saturday, November 09, 2013

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Its Renku Saturday #44, revisit Renku Saturday #43
Comment a verse to the haiku dialogue if you wish, i'll edit, and pin it upfront

swatting mosquitoes...
tired hands accrue
angry tempers

thin legs of a boy kicking
discarded tins in the street

--gillena cox

Chasing dragon flies
Today what place is it
he has strayed off to?

--Chiyo-ni (1701-1775)

around and around
burn away the will to bite
smoke swirls higher still

--somepinkflowers


First snow falling
through darkness

--Lorraine


reading in blanket
caressing the spot on wrist
mosquito sucked through

--howanxious



'switching from citronella candles to coils'
Linked today to 6WS



46 DAYS TO CHRISTMAS

14 comments:

  1. Curious as to why the switch from candle to coil?

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  2. the mosquitoes seem insenitive to the citronella candles, even though they would shy away from citronella incense; couldn't get incense so i took the next most effect the coils, it seems the smokiness annoys them

    much love...

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  3. around and around
    burn away the will to bite
    smoke swirls higher still

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  4. SPF thanks for sharing

    Much love...

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  5. Mosquito season is over here, winter is coming…
    have a wonderful Sunday!

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  6. First snow falling
    through darkness

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  7. Frieda have a nice winter, enjoy and be safe; dont put too much stress on your legs


    much love...

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  8. Thanks for sharing Lorraine

    much love...

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  9. No more citronella - summer's over… so sad, isn;t it?

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  10. Hilary

    happy you dropped in

    much love...

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  11. Anonymous6:23 PM

    That seems interesting.
    I would like to continue:

    reading in blanket
    caressing the spot on wrist
    mosquito sucked through

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  12. Thanks for sharing Anmol

    Much love

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  13. oh my I do detest those pesky bugs...love the Haikus!

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  14. thanks for stopping by Kathe

    much love...

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