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TAKE 1
this pelting rain beads
its cadence on my roof
song of the morning

TAKE 2
the pelting rain
beading its cadence on my roof
song of this morning

TAKE 3
the pelting rain beads
its cadence on my roof
song of this morning

TAKE 4
this pelting rain beads
its cadence to my roof
song of morning light

TAKE 5
this pelting rain
beads its cadence on my roof
morning courses in

this pelting rain
beads its cadence on my roof -
morning courses in
-- gillena cox



Revisit
cadence
gentle rain
unfurling



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Recuerda Mi Corazon haiku my heart "'morning rain"



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43 comments:

  1. Mark11:19 AM

    I really like the image of rain beading its cadence to a roof--a tin roof, I imagine.

    Frog and Raven

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  2. Gillena Cox11:24 AM

    Thanks yes; Mark here we say 'galvanize roofs'

    much love...

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  3. Reading Pleasure11:36 AM

    pelting rain
    beads cadence on roof
    morning song

    Brilliantly done, Gillena.

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  4. J C11:53 AM

    It only took one Take for me to hear that morning rain. I love rainy mornings....
    and afternoons....
    and evenings....
    and thunder at midnight.
    Nice one!

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  5. Gillena Cox12:04 PM

    Thanks for sharing your take Celestine

    much love...

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  6. Lea12:04 PM

    I loved each one of these takes Gillena! A film in the making, I can see the images oh so clearly and hear them too!

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  7. Gillena Cox12:05 PM

    Thanks Judie, happy you dropped in

    much love...

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  8. Gillena Cox12:05 PM

    Thanks for your appreciation Lea

    much love...

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  9. Faye12:36 PM

    Lovely illustration to go with all of the various versions of your poem.

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  10. payal agarwal1:06 PM

    Brilliant! :)

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  11. Linda Kunsman1:08 PM

    I like the image of your beautiful haiku (s). Love how you shared your play with the wording too. I love the last one:)

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  12. Gillena Cox1:29 PM

    Thanks for dropping in Fay

    much love...

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  13. Gillena Cox1:29 PM

    Thank you Payal

    much love...

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  14. Gillena Cox1:30 PM

    Thanks Linda

    much love...

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  15. Valerie-Jael1:53 PM

    A wonderful post! Valerie

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  16. Brian Miller2:27 PM

    i love the sound of the rain on the roof...or on an old pot in the yard....like drums...rhythm of the storm....

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  17. Julie2:27 PM

    Hi, you are invited to share this here: http://kittypartay.blogspot.com/2014/07/feline-art-friday-4.html

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  18. Out of Sight L2:38 PM

    yes such a calming soothing effect any way you write lovely Gillena

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  19. Gillena Cox3:25 PM

    Thanks for dropping in Valerie

    much love...

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  20. Gillena Cox3:26 PM

    Happy you dropped by Brian

    much love...

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  21. Gillena Cox3:27 PM

    Thanks for dropping in and inviting me to share Julie


    much love

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  22. Gillena Cox3:28 PM

    Happy you dropped in Lorraine

    much love...

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  23. Leovi3:53 PM

    I love your beautiful shower of pearls

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  24. Gillena Cox3:55 PM

    Thanks Leovi,

    much love...

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  25. gma4:01 PM

    Lovely words Gillena definitely a morning song.

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  26. Gillena Cox4:39 PM

    Happy you dropped in Gemma

    much love...

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  27. Giggles4:50 PM

    This is such a fun piece!! Have a great week!

    Hugs Giggles

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  28. Gillena Cox4:53 PM

    Thanks Giggles

    much love...

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  29. Magical Mystical Teacher7:54 AM

    Rainy mornings are somehow soothing, at least sometimes!

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  30. Gillena Cox11:01 AM

    Surely, thanks for dropping in Maggie

    much love...

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  31. carol l mckenna11:31 AM

    Creative post and haiku for HMH ~ thanks, ^_^

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

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  32. Gillena Cox11:58 AM

    Happy you dropped in Carol

    much love...

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  33. bellefrogworks12:13 PM

    So much fun to share your play with words - love the word images and the visual image as well.

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  34. Gillena Cox12:57 PM

    Thanks Belle

    much love...

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  35. rebecca10:23 PM

    YES to morning coursing in!

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  36. Gillena Cox5:53 AM

    Happy you dropped in Maggie

    much love...

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  37. denthe8:52 AM

    Very creative all those takes :-)

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  38. Gillena Cox12:06 PM

    Thanks Denthe

    much love...

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  39. Annie Jeffries3:28 AM

    Well done. The subtle changes make such a difference.

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  40. Gillena Cox7:11 PM

    Thanks Anne

    Much love...

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  41. Julie6:10 PM

    Thank you for linking up to Feline Art Friday, hope to see you back soon:
    http://kittypartay.blogspot.com/2014/07/feline-art-friday-5.html

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  42. Gillena Cox10:22 AM

    Thanks for inviting me Julie

    much love...

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