TAKE 1
this pelting rain beads
its cadence on my roof
song of the morning
TAKE 2
the pelting rain
beading its cadence on my roof
song of this morning
TAKE 3
the pelting rain beads
its cadence on my roof
song of this morning
TAKE 4
this pelting rain beads
its cadence to my roof
song of morning light
TAKE 5
this pelting rain
beads its cadence on my roof
morning courses in
this pelting rain
beads its cadence on my roof -
morning courses in
-- gillena cox
Revisit
cadence
gentle rain
unfurling
Recuerda Mi Corazon haiku my heart "'morning rain"
PP F: Week 18, Year 4
43 comments:
I really like the image of rain beading its cadence to a roof--a tin roof, I imagine.
Frog and Raven
Thanks yes; Mark here we say 'galvanize roofs'
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pelting rain
beads cadence on roof
morning song
Brilliantly done, Gillena.
It only took one Take for me to hear that morning rain. I love rainy mornings....
and afternoons....
and evenings....
and thunder at midnight.
Nice one!
Thanks for sharing your take Celestine
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I loved each one of these takes Gillena! A film in the making, I can see the images oh so clearly and hear them too!
Thanks Judie, happy you dropped in
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Thanks for your appreciation Lea
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Lovely illustration to go with all of the various versions of your poem.
Brilliant! :)
I like the image of your beautiful haiku (s). Love how you shared your play with the wording too. I love the last one:)
Thanks for dropping in Fay
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Thank you Payal
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Thanks Linda
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A wonderful post! Valerie
i love the sound of the rain on the roof...or on an old pot in the yard....like drums...rhythm of the storm....
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yes such a calming soothing effect any way you write lovely Gillena
Thanks for dropping in Valerie
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Happy you dropped by Brian
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Thanks for dropping in and inviting me to share Julie
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Happy you dropped in Lorraine
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I love your beautiful shower of pearls
Thanks Leovi,
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Lovely words Gillena definitely a morning song.
Happy you dropped in Gemma
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This is such a fun piece!! Have a great week!
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Thanks Giggles
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Rainy mornings are somehow soothing, at least sometimes!
Surely, thanks for dropping in Maggie
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Creative post and haiku for HMH ~ thanks, ^_^
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Happy you dropped in Carol
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So much fun to share your play with words - love the word images and the visual image as well.
Thanks Belle
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YES to morning coursing in!
Happy you dropped in Maggie
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Very creative all those takes :-)
Thanks Denthe
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Well done. The subtle changes make such a difference.
Thanks Anne
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Thanks for inviting me Julie
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