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Wednesday, July 16, 2014

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WALL

teabags infuse
some hot days and warm nights
penciling thoughts

~on the richter scale six point something~

deep in-breath
in response to a rumble
cracks in the walls

--gillena cox



Revisit
long night
shifting
aftermath



i am blog hopping today at Poetry Jam the prompt is "Unexpected"



32 comments:

  1. hoping that rumble doesnt knock too many pictures off the walls...but i guess that is better than knocking buildings down though...

    i take my tea as earl grey...just a dash of sugar....

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  2. Earthquakes must be really frightening to live through. I have never experienced them. Cracks in the walls would be disconcerting, but always good to have some tea.

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  3. nice that you have written another 'bridge' poem, Gillena. I cannot for a second imagine what an earthquake must feel like. Do you get them where you live?

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  4. Earl grey, i like, thanks for dropping in Brian

    Much love...

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  5. Happy you dropped in Mary, your are so lucky not to have experience of earthquakes, they are really scary

    Much love...

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  6. Sure do Gabrielle, thanks for dropping in

    much love

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  7. a reminder of that shaking..we've experienced many of these though not much devastating..nicely bridged Gillena :)

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  8. Stay well hope it stays still and not rumble anymore Gillena I will pray for you and those whom are affected by Nature's Wildest storm x

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  9. Thanks Sumana

    Much love...

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  10. Thanks for dropping in Lorraine

    Much love...

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  11. Nice haiku. Earthquakes.I slept through one a couple of years ago in Indonesia...I'm a deep sleeper:)

    Twinings English Breakfast with scones jam and cream..I'll bring the roses for our tea party Thanks:)

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  12. very nice lines Gillena..loved the way you have bridged them...stay safe from the earthquakes..it sure comes unexpected..:)

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  13. Very cool puente. I have been through a few earthquakes, here, on the West Coast of Canada. They are usually small, though one on Vancouver Island (years ago) was so strong I woke up became everything started shaking in a dream I was having. That was weird.

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  14. Earthquakes are indeed sudden and unexpected things. We had a small jolt not long ago. Six point something is a pretty hefty shaking though. Love the photo you have with this.

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  15. Great photo and I really enjoyed the meditative quality of that first stanza. Lovely :-)

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  16. Rallentanda, happy you dropped in

    Much love...

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  17. Thanks Arathi

    Much love...

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  18. Scary dream, thanks for sharing, happy you dropped in Wendy

    Much love...

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  19. Thanks Peggy

    Much love...

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  20. Thank you for your appreciation Sara

    Much love...

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  21. Earthquakes are like reminders that our traditional belief in the earth as a rock solid foundation may not be so rock solid as we would like it to be. Lovely poems.

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  22. Terrible earthquakes! Their news are enough to scare me out. Nice usage of image. Nice write!

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  23. Thanks Gemma

    much love...

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  24. Thanks Umang

    much love...

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  25. Cracks can be good or bad, a can hide an emotion of life. I like this.

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  26. Having experienced earthquakes myself, Gillena, I can appreciate well what you have written...

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  27. a message
    into my sensing soles
    this earth

    ... and the "stress" we fully understand. _m

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  28. nice one, thanks for sharing Magyar

    much love...

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  29. Earthquakes are definitely not my favorite of the "unexpecteds"! We only get rumblings and shakings here in Maine periodically. My dog doesn't like them!

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  30. Thanks for dropping in Donna

    much love...

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  31. Earthquakes are indeed unexpected. I really like the bridge, it's quite a challenge to use them!

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  32. Thanks Minerva

    much love...

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