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Wednesday, November 05, 2014

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coconut trees sway...
a pocketful of pebbles
to stir the waters
his wag tail dog frisks along
the shoreline shifting in waves
-- gillena cox




Revisit
lapping
toss
yield



i am blog hopping today at
Poetry Jam the prompt is "pebble"


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30 comments:

  1. Mary11:59 AM

    Nice - can picture the shoreline shifting in waves.....

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  2. Anonymous1:58 PM

    Beautiful scene to think of! Keep it up!

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  3. Peggy2:32 PM

    What a peaceful feeling scene. I like that wag-tailed dog!

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  4. Brian Miller2:40 PM

    great to have that friend along while you are skipping rocks...or just plunking them in the water to make ripples....

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  5. alan17042:57 PM

    I can taste the sea breeze in this, beautifully conveyed.

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  6. Gillena Cox4:00 PM

    Thanks Mary, happy you dropped in

    Much love...

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  7. Gillena Cox4:05 PM

    Thanks for dropping in Umanga

    Much love...

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  8. Gillena Cox4:06 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Peggy

    Much love...

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  9. Gillena Cox4:07 PM

    Indeed Brian, happy you stopped by

    Much love...

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  10. Gillena Cox4:07 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Alan

    Much love...

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  11. Pealogic4:24 PM

    "his wag tail dog frisks along"

    I just loved this line.

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  12. Sarav8:50 PM

    Love the flow of this poem and a pocket full of pebbles to stir the waters... Wonderful! :-)

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  13. Sumana Roy6:02 AM

    such lively scene..could feel the dancing of life here...

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  14. Out of Sight L9:47 AM

    How beautiful this is, I love what you write and the designs you show, beautiful, Gillena

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  15. rallentanda11:43 AM

    Nice tranquil beach scene.

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  16. Gillena Cox12:28 PM

    Thank you Pealogic

    Much love...

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  17. Gillena Cox12:29 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Sara

    Much love...

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  18. Gillena Cox12:30 PM

    Happy you dropped in Lorraine

    Much love...

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  19. Gillena Cox12:31 PM

    Happy you dropped in Rallentanda

    Much love...

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  20. Bill7:20 PM

    moonlight on the water
    the weight of a pebble

    by the ocean
    the weight of a pebble
    on the moon

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  21. Gillena Cox8:04 AM

    nice! thanks for sharing Bill

    much love...

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  22. artbyrae12:03 AM

    very nice

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  23. Cifar4:13 AM

    reading and praising , beautiful lines

    Pebbles

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  24. Gabriella2:42 PM

    I enjoyed the beach walk you took us on.

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  25. Gillena Cox3:58 PM

    Happy you dropped by Rae

    Much love...

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  26. Gillena Cox4:25 PM

    Thank you Cifar

    Much love...

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  27. Gillena Cox4:26 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Gabriella

    Much love...

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  28. Donna Smith9:35 AM

    Nothing happier than a "wag tail dog" at the beach! Thanks for the images today.

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  29. Gillena Cox4:37 PM

    Happy you dropped in Donna

    much love...

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  30. Intelliblog7:22 PM

    A happy serene moment! Lovely, Gillena.

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