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road side she sells incense sticks
her skirt of bright orange hues
the setting sun rends
every sorrow from her heart
seashells on beach sand
--gillena cox
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Carpe-Diem Tan Renga Challenge #59, Panchali's "mystic purple flames"
mystic purple flames
arise from the spirit’s stalks
chill my autumn heart (© Panchali)
road side she sells incense sticks
her skirt of bright orange hues (gillena)
the setting sun rends
every sorrow from her heart
seashells on beach sand (gillena)
Recuerda Mi Corazon haiku my heart "seashells"
Beautiful and mournful!
ReplyDeletesimply outstanding, simplicity has never been so wonderfully beautiful, only you G.
ReplyDeleteAppropriately matched to the haiku. Good one Gillena!
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Thank you for your appreciation Dolores
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Thank you Lorraine, humble bow
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Thank you Hank
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Reminds me of sad times in my youth. Those times, in the end, strengthen me.
ReplyDeletethank you for your appreciation Annie
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There's something lonely---and mysterious---about this incense seller.
ReplyDeleteLate Haiku My Heart
I'm detecting a delicate musk, set among orange hues...beautiful. x
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ReplyDeleteThis is oh so beautiful and poignant... your words have painted quite a picture for me...
ReplyDeleteI like the juxtaposition of the incense sticks and the bright skirt,
ReplyDeletelike your renga ... very nicely done!
ReplyDeleteVery poignant, Gillena.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Mark
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Thank you for your appreciation Sue
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Happy you dropped in Rajesh
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Thank you for your appreciation Lea
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Thank you for your appreciation Juilet
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Thank you Georgia
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Happy you dropped in Usha
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Beautiful continuation Gillena
ReplyDeleteThank you Kristjaan
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As Rebecca suggested, please use last week’s link to share your new haiku for November 21st. Click here for the link: Haiku My Heart at Recuerda Mi Corazon
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Thank you Maggie
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