bird songs on the wind -
did you hear that plumeria
fall to the ground
© gillena cox
Carpe Diem #741 wrapped in a straw mat
...he riddle is probably one of the very oldest poetical techniques. It has been guessed that early spiritual knowledge was secretly preserved and passed along through riddles. Because poetry, as it is today, is the commercialization of religious prayers, incantations, and knowledge, it is no surprise that riddles still form a serious part of poetry's transmission of ideas.The 'trick' is to state the riddle in as puzzling terms as possible. What can one say that the reader cannot figure out the answer?
A fallen blossom
Returning to the bough, I thought --
But no, a butterfly.
© Moritake
Very mysterious :)
ReplyDeleteNicely done ... and have a great weekend! Bastet
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Thanks Georgia
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That's a nice one there..
ReplyDeleteThe fragrance of plumeria!
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped in to read mine Mark
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Tree flowers fall; in silence to the grass; a bird listens.
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thanks for dropping in and sharing Magyar
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This is gentle and mysterious at the same time.
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Thanks Hamish
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In for a quick Hi my dear Gillena, so beautiful, xo
ReplyDeleteHappy you dropped in Lorraine
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Loved this take! Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThank you Vyomi
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