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image courtesy Carpe Diem


they tease the seascape
coconut palms fronds in the wind -
sound of lapping waves

seagull -
each dive from the rocks
feeds with precision

sundown -
a bus trudging through forests
such narrow paths

© gillena cox


i'm blog hopping today at
Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #49 at the seashore (Vision Quest reprise)

25 comments:

  1. such a lovely series, I feel I was there and I want to go back!! :)

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  2. Anonymous8:26 PM

    This really take me away to a delightful place.

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  3. Thanks for your appreciation Cheryl-Lynn

    much love...

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  4. Thanks Anon

    much love...

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  5. Anonymous10:25 PM

    beautiful imagery, Gillena :)

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  6. enjoyed your post . thank you

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  7. thanks Polona

    much love...

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  8. Happy you dropped by Siggi

    much love...

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  9. always such a lovely pleasure to stop and absorb your words and lovely photo dear Gillena, so many have left...breaks my heart, stay well

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  10. __Gillena, my echoed walk through your fine verses. I see as I see, through that that you have written. _m

    long light
    in this narrow pathway
    palm fronds taunt

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  11. Happy you dropped in Lorraine

    much love...

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  12. Thanks for sharing Magyar

    much love...

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  13. What a lovely group of haiku. Nice scene you have painted.

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  14. happy you dropped in Janice

    much love...

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  15. Interesting perspective in these haiku, Gillena. The first is my personal favorite!

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  16. Thank you for your appreciation Lynn

    much love...

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  17. I thought that was lovely. Well done!

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  18. Thank you for stopping by Blogoratti

    Much love...

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  19. You did great on this Tokubetsudesu episode Gillena, three little gems with great images hidden in it. Well done.

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  20. Lovely haiku that intertwine beautifully.

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  21. Nicely written Gillena .. they creat a beautiful image. Bastet

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  22. Thanks Kristjaan

    much love...

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  23. thanks for dropping in Sara

    much love...

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  24. Happy you dropped in Georgia

    much love...

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