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a verdant drive through -
near a lagoon vendors ply
first view of the beach

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a verdant drive through
from the side of the mountain
water tricking down

near a lagoon vendors ply
their sugar cakes and fudge -
wide toothy smiles

first view of the beach
smell of the salty sea
draws me closer
© gillena cox 2015




I am blog hopping today at
Carpe Diem #762 lagoon
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25 comments:

  1. Adas Alcove2:02 PM

    Very nice set! Very vivid!

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  2. Gillena Cox5:52 PM

    thanks for dropping in Dolores
    much love...

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  3. Magical Mystical Teacher10:24 PM

    Are you sure it's not the sweets vendor drawing you closer? ;)

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  4. Anonymous11:12 PM

    Wonderful story in haiku -- I enjoyed this :)

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  5. Unknown12:14 AM

    a lovely journey in your set and the best for the last...love that salty air!

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  6. Gillena Cox7:39 AM

    (◕‿◕｡) more of a salt than a sweet tooth person Maggie

    much love...

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  7. Gillena Cox7:40 AM

    thank you Paloma

    much love..

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  8. Gillena Cox7:41 AM

    yeah that salty air, thanks for dropping in Cheryl-Lynn

    much love...

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  9. Out of Sight L8:58 AM

    You make me thirst for the knowledge you surely have to draw and speak beauty and love, thank you my dear Gillena

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  10. Bill11:24 AM

    Nicely spun.

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  11. Adelaide10:14 PM

    A lovely set. I like the last the best.

    Adelaide

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    1. Gillena Cox10:31 PM

      Happy you dropped bin Adelaide

      Much love...

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  12. Blogoratti2:41 AM

    That was a lovely and mesmerizing piece.

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  13. Gillena Cox3:34 AM

    Thanks Blogoratti

    Much love...

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  14. alp8:26 AM

    Te mando un beso desde Murcia..que vaya todo el fin de semana muy bien...

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    1. Gillena Cox12:10 AM

      Thanks for dropping in alp

      Much love...

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  15. Reading Pleasure11:30 AM

    Lovely, Gillena.

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    1. Gillena Cox12:11 AM

      Happy you dropped in Celestine

      Much love...

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  16. Magyar8:30 PM

    A nice trio of your verses, Gillena_! Instant's response, a memory of long ago. _m

    in salted air
    the near sounds of high-tide waves
    Schoodic Point

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    1. Gillena Cox12:11 AM

      Thanks for sharing yours Magyar

      Much love...

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  17. Bastet's Waka Library2:13 AM

    enchanting!

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  18. Gillena Cox7:50 AM

    happy you dropped in Georgia

    much love...

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