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[image from pixabay]

stormy kind of wind –
a door slams in the gaze of
a pigeon cooing
© gillena cox 2017




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30 comments:

  1. brudberg4:28 PM

    The sound of that door is a tribute to the wind

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    1. Gillena Cox5:10 PM

      Thanks for your apprwciation Björn

      Much💖love

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  2. Sherry Blue Sky4:41 PM

    I like the contrast between the loud slam and the gentle coo.

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  3. Mary4:53 PM

    So many actions expressed in this masterful verse!

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  4. Old Egg5:37 PM

    Clearly the door has heard it all before. All creatures seem to have good and bad points and pigeons are a case in point for their gentle cooing is offset by the mess they make!

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  5. Donna@LivingFromHappiness5:47 PM

    Windy here as a big snow storm looms....love the wind when it is summer like weather though

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  6. tonispencer6:05 PM

    Lovely poem. I love the contrast between that loud slam and the gentle cooing.

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  7. Truedessa6:25 PM

    The wind slams the door so one might hear the gentle cooing..so much in so few words.

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  8. hyperCRYPTICal7:13 PM

    Lovely Gillena.
    The wind has whistled here today, but alas no (wood) pigeons cooing.
    Anna :o]

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  9. Anonymous7:39 PM

    Like the photo and your words that match it so well,

    Elizabeth

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  10. Wendy Bourke7:43 PM

    This is a brilliant haiku! I found it to be so impactful. An awesome bit of writing.

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  11. thotpurge8:51 PM

    That's lovely Gillena... thank you for sharing with Micropoetry Month.

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  12. ZQ9:13 PM

    That was powerful!
    ZQ

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  13. Susan10:09 PM

    The slam and the coo make for an excellent contrast. Thank you, too, for the Cold Play.

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  14. Sumana Roy2:12 AM

    Love the 'cooing' standing out against all these odds.

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  15. Brendan6:04 AM

    There's a distant violence here, a memory perhaps or sense of something to come.

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  16. Sanaa Rizvi6:10 AM

    Love this! The contrast between the slamming of the door and the gentle cooing of the pigeon is brilliant!

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  17. Gillena Cox11:58 AM

    Thank you for your appreciation Sanaa

    much love...

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  18. Gillena Cox12:04 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Brendan. Happy you dropped by to read mine

    much love...

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  19. Gillena Cox12:05 PM

    Glad you dropped in Susan

    much love...

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  20. Gillena Cox12:08 PM

    Thanks for dropping in ZQ

    much love...

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  21. Gillena Cox12:12 PM

    Happy you dropped in to read mine Rajani

    much love...

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  22. Gillena Cox12:13 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Wendy

    much love...

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  23. Gillena Cox12:16 PM

    Thanks for dropping in Elizabeth

    much love...

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  24. Gillena Cox12:18 PM

    Happy you dropped in Anna

    much love...

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  25. Gillena Cox12:20 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Trudessa

    much love...

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  26. Gillena Cox3:15 PM

    Thank you for your appreciation Toni

    much love...

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  27. Gillena Cox3:16 PM

    Glad you dropped by Donna

    much love...

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  28. Amrit Sinha5:01 PM

    This is a beautiful composition.

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  29. Gillena Cox7:23 AM

    Thanks for your appreciation Amrit

    much love...

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