Lunch Break: 2186

Sunday, November 19, 2017

2186

[image from pixabay]

stormy kind of wind –
a door slams in the gaze of
a pigeon cooing
© gillena cox 2017

Sunday Smiles

Sundays are always special here at Lunch Break. Today is #61 in the series The Sunday Standard when 5-7-5 haiku is featured. Here's wishing you a happy Sunday email me post a COMMENT or leave a link to your blog at the linky below

Blog hopping today at

Poetry Pantry # 379

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Weekend Mini-Challenge: Doors

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MM: Nov 19 2017

Enjoy The Music

Before you leave see also
Sunday Savvy 61
Sunday Lime 61
19 November 2014

30 comments:

brudberg said...: The sound of that door is a tribute to the wind; 4:28 PM
Sherry Blue Sky said...: I like the contrast between the loud slam and the gentle coo.; 4:41 PM
Mary said...: So many actions expressed in this masterful verse!; 4:53 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for your apprwciation Björn

Much💖love; 5:10 PM
Old Egg said...: Clearly the door has heard it all before. All creatures seem to have good and bad points and pigeons are a case in point for their gentle cooing is offset by the mess they make!; 5:37 PM
Donna@LivingFromHappiness said...: Windy here as a big snow storm looms....love the wind when it is summer like weather though; 5:47 PM
tonispencer said...: Lovely poem. I love the contrast between that loud slam and the gentle cooing.; 6:05 PM
Truedessa said...: The wind slams the door so one might hear the gentle cooing..so much in so few words.; 6:25 PM
hyperCRYPTICal said...: Lovely Gillena.
The wind has whistled here today, but alas no (wood) pigeons cooing.
Anna :o]; 7:13 PM
Anonymous said...: Like the photo and your words that match it so well,

Elizabeth; 7:39 PM
Wendy Bourke said...: This is a brilliant haiku! I found it to be so impactful. An awesome bit of writing.; 7:43 PM
thotpurge said...: That's lovely Gillena... thank you for sharing with Micropoetry Month.; 8:51 PM
ZQ said...: That was powerful!
ZQ; 9:13 PM
Susan said...: The slam and the coo make for an excellent contrast. Thank you, too, for the Cold Play.; 10:09 PM
Sumana Roy said...: Love the 'cooing' standing out against all these odds.; 2:12 AM
Brendan said...: There's a distant violence here, a memory perhaps or sense of something to come.; 6:04 AM
Sanaa Rizvi said...: Love this! The contrast between the slamming of the door and the gentle cooing of the pigeon is brilliant!; 6:10 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you for your appreciation Sanaa

much love...; 11:58 AM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you for your appreciation Brendan. Happy you dropped by to read mine

much love...; 12:04 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Glad you dropped in Susan

much love...; 12:05 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for dropping in ZQ

much love...; 12:08 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped in to read mine Rajani

much love...; 12:12 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you for your appreciation Wendy

much love...; 12:13 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for dropping in Elizabeth

much love...; 12:16 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Happy you dropped in Anna

much love...; 12:18 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you for your appreciation Trudessa

much love...; 12:20 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thank you for your appreciation Toni

much love...; 3:15 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Glad you dropped by Donna

much love...; 3:16 PM
Amrit Sinha said...: This is a beautiful composition.; 5:01 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Thanks for your appreciation Amrit

much love...; 7:23 AM