[image courtesy Carpe Diem Haiku Kai]
SNOWFLAKE ARALIA RYOGIN
village kids
don't break all the plum branches
for cattle whips
a muddy path leads to school
who can skip on such a day
into the sea
throwing my sandals
rain on my hat
pirogues waddle a little
clouds rest on the sea surface
polished again
the mirror is as clear as
flower-like snowflakes
turning away from the smooth sea
colour splayed mountains beckon
falling to the ground
a flower closer to the root
bidding farewell
running fast from there to home
as if hearing mother's voice
mid-harvest
a crane on the rice paddy
in a village in autumn
a leaf falls as if dancing
with a swing partner
sleep on a journey
then you will understand my poem
autumn winds
back then children held respect
for their parents and elders
2LINERS © gillena cox 2018
3LINERS © Matsuo Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
Here are the six (6)haiku © Matsuo Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold) given to work with:
into the sea
throwing my sandals
rain on my hat
falling to the ground
a flower closer to the root
bidding farewell
village kids
don't break all the plum branches
for cattle whips
mid-harvest
a crane on the rice paddy
in a village in autumn
sleep on a journey
then you will understand my poem
autumn winds
polished again
the mirror is as clear as
flower-like snowflakes
Blog hopping today with
Carpe Diem's Renga Challenge #4 flower-like snowflakes
Revisit
26 July 2018
26 July 2014
26 July 2013
