image from google dot com
clouds drift
an intake of morning breath
i am
the universe
unfathomable span
a speck of dust
and there was light
vaster the mind of God
a thought revealed
bird songs
a choir of difference stirring
through winds
grandmother
a tryst with contemplation
haiku willed
when the sunlight
sieves through tomorrow
mysteries appear
-- gillena cox
Revisit
to poem
hair and now
lightness
Poetry Jam the prompt is "identity"
Ah, each of us is part of the 'universe,' aren't we? And there are so many 'mysteries' that make up each of us in our existence. Though we are a 'speck of dust' we are important in the 'mind of God.'
ReplyDeletethank you Mary for your appreciation
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Very interesting take on the prompt which suggests that even though we are all individual really are just a small part of the family of man.
ReplyDeleteBeyond beautiful Gillena, wow and bravo
ReplyDeletethank you for your appreciation Elaine
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happy you stopped by Lorraine
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every image here has its own beauty and importance..beautifully captivated Gillena :)
ReplyDeletenice linked haiku...and an exploration of our place and identity in the universe...and in relation to our higher powers....cool write gilena
ReplyDeleteThank you Sumana
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Thank you Brian
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this is so full of little gems, that created heavenly masters hand in each of us, well captured,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used the form to convey individual images that then shape the whole. And I agree that, in the end, who we are is still a bit mysterious.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Alan
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Thank you for your appreciation Gabriella
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I enjoyed the style of this with the linked haikus that explore is a broad sense the question of who we are. Specks of dust indeed.
ReplyDelete"and there was light" - ah, all the better to see ourselves, the "specks of dust"!
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Your images remind me of times in Trinidad's rain forest. I love the final verse and the sunlight seiving through tomorrow.
ReplyDeletethat's heavenly composition, intriguing and beautiful
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fallen leaf
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the wind . . .
This is absolutely beautiful. I love how you place yourself in the midst of this wondrous universe. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your appreciation Peggy
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◕‿◕｡) Happy you dropped in Donna
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Happy you dropped in Mascha
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Thank you Cifar
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thank you for sharing Bill
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Lovely, Gillena. Puts the individual aspect of ourselves firmly within the grander scheme of things!
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