Its Renku Saturday #31
revisit Renku Saturday #30
To tangle
or untangle the willow
it’s up to the wind
-- Chiyo-Ni (1703-1775)
(trans. Donegan & Isibashi)
language of the breeze
wind chimes this morning
--gillena cox
breeze whispers
a long ago Love
Love that never hurt me
--Lorraine Renaud, CA
10 comments:
That's a beautiful little ku, Gillena. "this morning" gives it an in-the-moment feeling.
very beautiful...I can hear the chimes, feel the breeze.
__Such nice language, that of the "breeze," and yours that paints the scene. _m
I've been catching up on your posts for the past week. Love them all.
Adelaide
breeze whispers
a long ago Love
Love that never hurt me
Bill, i always appreciate your critiques, thank you
much love...
Geraldine, thank you for dropping in
much love...
Adelaide, glad you dropped by
much love...
Lorraine thank you, i'll edit and add your verse to the renku
much love...
Doug, thank you for your appreciation
much love...
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