shower me with
your talk of better days -
slow sun rising
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shower me with
your talk of better days -
slow sun rising
a bus turns wide at the curb
egrets return from their roost
© gillena cox 2015
Revisit
baldwin/cox - Mango 2008
Ruby Tuesdays Too
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Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #54 lost in the woods about tanka
too old for new love
the moon rises each night
as I remember
the backseats of strange cars
its helpful light afterwards
© Jane Reichhold
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departing geese
King Winter is on his way
snow and frost will come
cherry blossoms bloom again
the sound of geese returning
© Chèvrefeuille
15 comments:
Poignant read, really nice. Greetings!
Showers, feed all things.
__Nice photo and verse, Gillena, the positive view of rain. Nature's promise is always kept. _m
Thanks for your appreciation Blogoratti
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Thanks for your appreciation Magyar
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The shower of which you so charmingly write is one that I would love to be drenched in!
Blue Broom Tanka
Thank you for your appreciation Maggie
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At first, I read "better days" as the good old days (showing my age, no doubt), but the last line turns my thoughts to what is to come. A beautifully constructed and meaningful ku, dear Gillena.
Wow what a nice post. I love how you show us the way to your tanka, prolonging your haiku as if it was the starting verse of a Tan Renga. Well done ...
a lovely lunch break indeed
lovely post .. I really like this image! Bastet
thanks for your appreciation Bill
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happy you dropped by Rhymes
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Thanks for dropping in to read mine George
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So, so beautiful, shower me with cool Fall ing leaves, dear Gillena
ooh is it already autumn where you live Lorraine
happy you dropped in
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