a wandering crow
its old nest has become
a plum tree
lingering twilight adds
a coat of gold to evening
washed in silhouettes
her cabin dons a creepy mien -
bedtime stories
a cricket withholds its chirp
green leaves wet with dew
coffee aromas
in hushed tones of morning's breath -
earnest prayers
feet slipping into sandals
to continue trek of scenes
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[image courtesy Carpe Diem]
wind in the pines
swirls upward to heaven
whispered prayers
her steady trust of needle
beauty embroiders itself
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Carpe Diem
Tan Renga Challenge Month 2017 #18 a wandering crow (Matsuo Basho)
This pre-script was not by Basho himself, it was added by Doho in his book Sho O Zen-den. In this poem Basho compares himself to the crow painted on the screen. Instead of lodging in the simplicity of a crow's nest, he sleeps among plum blossoms because he is staying with an elegant friend. Crows are not usually considered a migrating bird, but the idea of a wandering crow means a bird of passage or a priest on a journey. (Source: "Basho's Complete Haiku" by Jane Reichhold)
a wandering crow
its old nest has become
a plum tree
-hokku © Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
lingering twilight adds
a coat of gold to evening
washed in silhouettes
her cabin dons a creepy mien -
bedtime stories
a cricket withholds its chirp
green leaves wet with dew
coffee aromas
in hushed tones of morning's breath -
earnest prayers
feet slipping into sandals
to continue trek of scenes
- verses 2-6 © gillena cox
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Carpe Diem
Tan Renga Challenge Month 2017 #17 wind in the pines (Candy)
wind in the pines
swirls upward to heaven
whispered prayers
© Candy
her steady trust of needle
beauty embroiders itself
© gillena cox
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8 comments:
A beautiful Soliloquy no Renga Gillena. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks for dropping by Kristjaan
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Beautiful and evocative, thanks Gillena :D)
Happy you dropped in Sue
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delightful, vivid images. "gold coat" "creepy mien" Wonderful! Well done.
I also love the movement or flow of time in the solo renga. twilight, bedtime (night), then dew (morning), then coffee and morning, and then off into the day's activities.
I see what you did there. Nice!
Thank you for your appreciation Lolly
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You are one talented haijin as well as a prolific writer.
Congrats on getting two haiku in Heron's Nest.
Adelaide
Thank you Adelaide
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